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for Sunlight in a Dark Room

by sunshinemelodi

schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, Naruto without chakra still hadnled himself :d NARUTO ROCKS!!! Itachi - hn, better figure it out soon, fo r and Uchiha genius you're kinda slow :d heh I actually love that in this story. It's really cool :D and it's so cool that you updated!!! hehe - made me real happy. Nice chapter ^_6

Hina xXxx

p.s. you're just making me more and more curious as to how this is all gonna pan out :D lol
person sainaru
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG Itachi touching naruto so cute this is getting better in every chapter and i am gonna keep reviewing lol. Angry sasuke i just love it *slams hands on tsunades desk* oh i just love when hes angry or jealous thats y im kinda hoping he sees naruto with itachi still alive oh is naruto going to go back to the village *not wait don't tell i wanna be surprised* stay with itachi naruto lol. Please keep writing and ill keep on reading

*hugs* for this chapter ^_^
person Cat-san Uzumaki
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, ur story is totally AWESOME!!! its fantastic!! Im so happy i found it. lol itanaru is awesome. u dont get too many of them with all the sasunaru fans out there (not saying im NOT one myself, hehehe)
person Mey
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! Thyis chapter was just so good!!!!!!
I lurv how Itachi's character is evolving. I mean, poor Naruto, he'll be stuffed along with the bastard forever, but at least he's learning feelings along the way xD
How long do you think it will go on? Since the argument length has been sort of mentioned (two weeks to damnation according to Tsunade) I understand it will end somtime in that period, but I wonder how much will it be in chapters =)...
Excelent wrinting (as allways X3) and hope to read you soon ^_____^
person Anon
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is good. Please update soon and it would be lovely if there was some action between naruto and itachi.
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wandering thoughts suit Itachi dammit! Anyway, i find myself checking sporadically for an update on your story every week lol. I know i've said this before but you write Itachi really well. In fact all your fics should just be ItaxNaru. Lol, i'll read every single one of those suckers! Naruto has a point though, i don't mind listening to Itachi's voice either. Whoever's his seiyu gave him the sexiest voice in the bunch. Sasuke's a close second ^_^. Maybe Naruto should keep insisting that Itachi speak to him more. And maybe Naruto should tell him the real reason why I, i mean HE, wants to hear him, hehehe.

There's one thing i've been meaning to ask you. I don't know if i missed this in the introduction or any chap for that matter, but there hasn't been any mention of the Yondaime...or has there? And does Naruto know about his 'relationship' to him in this fic? And if not or so, would Itachi fill him in on it since, in the manga anyway, he seems to know? Or...am i just jumping ahead of the gun and you are completely ignoring it? Lol. Anyway, it's all good. Update soon.
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know how amazingly impressed I am with your fan-fic. 'Sunlight in a Dark Room' is incredibly well writen and completely engaging in its story telling. While I'm sure the story will eventually turn to smut (heh, no complaints ^_^), the pace and build up of the story is wonderful. You say this is your first attempt at fan fiction and I hope its something you keep up and perhaps develop into original material. You are a talented writer and I eagerly await your next chapter.

I know this review #60-something, but I hope it encourages others to check out the story. It is something not to be missed.
person jess
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
maaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! this is so awesome! ^_^ the itachi and naruto interactions are so sweet and adorable and fun! i really like how you have portayed both of them... and the whole gaara and sasuke thing is so funny! woot! basically the story is great and i will be eagerly awaiting more. thank you so much... please write like the wind! ^_^
person sainaru
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
once again great chapter ^^ i like how ur taking the relationship between itachi and naruto slow unlike some other stories i read where they would hate each other one minute and have sex the next lol. I also like how u r trying to keep everyone in character. poor sai though everyone ignores him lol ohh and i cant wait till ur next chapter ur on a roll ^^ pplz keep writing
person rozengrass
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
is it itachi fall in love with naruto?