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for Sunlight in a Dark Room

by sunshinemelodi

schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow two hot guys in a bath *fans self* right... o-kay lol now onto the review :) I'm really really REALLy liking this fic :D I especially like the way that you are developing what's happening between itachi and naruto, i's working out well and it's also I think helping for me to think of them as a pairing guess, it seems like when they actually dod do something there will be more depth to it because of this so I think you're doing a really great job ^_6

Hina xXxx
person kkk
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Old man" lol. Its perfect. I really like how this story is developing. Its slow but its more realistic. I'm glad that your not rushing to the good part right away even thought i'm dying to get to it.
Hmm i wonder. Is there something developing between a certain kazekage & the teme? That would be interesting.
Thanks for the chapter. As always i've enjoyed it greatly.
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chap.

My fav part wasn't actually the bath scene, it was when Itachi lifted Naruto's chin. For some reason even though it wasn't necessarily romantically inclined i found it sweet, especially since Naruto was feeling vulnerable. Nice job there. I think you know, given if Itachi forms a deep attachment to Naruto, which we are all waiting for, i think he could be quite dedicated and protective of someone he would let himself care about despite himself, especially with someone like Naruto who has that quality to bring out the best in others. In fact it's quite possible that no one in the manga aside from Naruto would successfully be able to bring that kinda reaction out of him, knowing how guarded Itachi is. Anyway, just a rant. Update soon.
person Amaya
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, wow. I've never been very good at saying anything constructive, the best I can really do is give you two thumbs way way up and tell you what freaking awesome job you're doing!!! And I love the way you've captured all of their personalities, especially Itachi. He's my all time favorite Naruto character and so far you are doing so freaking perfectly, I looooove this story. Please update!! *will follow every story you write*
person Iori
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that I am really liking this fic. I like how you've personified itachi and Naruto. It's a nice change to see Itachi as a civilized and deadly efficient person, than the fannon rape and kill everyone Itachi. I patiently wait for more.
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
“Hn.”

There it goes! It ended with my fav response to...ahh yes, everything. Lol. I just decided to harass your reviews before i went to sleep for the night since i realized i hadn't left anything for this chap lol. Great job, as usual.
person karin
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering. How old are Itachi & Naruto?
person sainaru
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
u kno i was just wondering if sasuke is going to fight itachi over naruto that would be soo cute then naruto still diecides to go with itachi would just complete my fantasy lol by the way plz keep writing im really enjoying this story and i like the fact that its not another naru/sasu story they are like soooooo played out lol

love ya ^____^
person Kamikyo
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My god! They are soooo cute! Normaly, I prefer SasuXNaru, but this story is so interesting an cute the same time, it may convert me^^. Keep it on!
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh - now that you did things from Konoha's POV it's like it's hit me, the enormaty of what's going on :( I feel sorry for Sasuke but then with what's going on and will probably happen betweenn Naruto and Itachi (*smirk* which I really want to see btw) I'm feeling torn. On another note lol, the chakra thing was interesting and I wonder if Naruto will actually be able to get Itachi to give him a little bit of info on what's going on regarding Kyubi. The bit at the end where Naruto put the cloak over Itachi was nice ^_^ I liked it and Itachi's reaction and response was typical of Itachi and an Uchiha lol. Nice chp. ^_6

Hina xXxx