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for Sunlight in a Dark Room

by sunshinemelodi

person Finnel
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww poor sasuke, but it really doesn't suprises me that you made him a non-morning person!
i loved the bit about naruto jumping on him to wake him up! ((inner-mind theatre replaying!!! =^-^=))
is sai still with the team? i'd love to see the play between sasuke, gaara and sai! ((it would be hilerious!!!))
can't wait for the next up-date!
good luck!!!

person kkk
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I abso *fucking* lutely love this story. That was interesting with the four tails, it was a really nice escape route for the "couple" to spend some more quality time together & develop something. I guess i can only hope that all of the other akatsuki are dead.
It's funny how Naruto is reacting to Itachi's touches. That would be embarrassing to Naruto when Itachi realizes that our little Naru-chan (so uke) is attracted to one of the most deadliest missing nin.
I am so excited to find out how this fic is going to develop.
Thanks for the update:)
person Mey
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, awsome fic ^^
I'm really happy that I found this, cuz it really has an interesting plot, as well as nicely developed characters (and that's what I'm seeking the most among fics).
Please keep on writing cuz I wanna know how poor Kitsune's gonna get out of this xD
person TrixXx
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hell Ya! I luv this fic, I'm so glad Naru-chan is ok but what's gonna happen next? ^-^
person Kamikyo
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm short on time so:
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!
I can not wait for the next chapter!
person Finnel
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Jaaa! Brilliant! ((was sitting cheering the 4tails on))
Yay! Naruto lives!!! ((Even better, Itachi saved him =^-^=))
Sooooo, does this mean no more Akatsuki??? ((Starts crying! Poor Sushi-chan!!))
Keep the up-dates coming this is just getting better and better!
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Big, brave, man of men Itachi, taking control of the situation and saving the damsel in--woops, wrong frame of mind! ^_^. My fav line from that whole chap would have to be Itachi's creative response thing. For some reason that made me laugh for several seconds. Maybe i need to switch teas, *shrugs* lol. Anyway, good job as usual. ;)
person Cat-san Uzumaki
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooooh~! suspense....! lol i luff this story. IT ROCKS!! when do they have sex...?
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was intense O_O

Hope their okay adn I wonder what it was that Naruto shouted out at the end. Anyway, cool chp. ^_^ you update pretty quick heh, which is great for me lol ^_6

Hina xXxx
person sainaru
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice i cant wait for the next chapter