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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sugoi!!! I love your style of writing. The portrayal of both characters are exactly how I want them to be. I love itanaru & I think there's not enough out there. Please update soon.
Thank You. Thank You. Thank You.
Thank You. Thank You. Thank You.
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
eeek! what's going to happen???
please up-date soon or i might just drop dead from suspence!!!
please up-date soon or i might just drop dead from suspence!!!
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i thought it was a good chapter, interesting. the naruto you're giving us is interesting too, the way he accepted what was happening and then thought about how he really didn't think anyone would actually miss him was sad but it seemed like a realistic thought for naruto to have. i'm kinda glad that you didn't make itachi talk a lot more as well because i think it keeps him in character, the way you portrayed his thoughts and the way he was trying to figure out naruto was really well done i thought so... yeah lol - i kinda wrote a lot there. cool (sorry about not reviweing before lol - i was feeling lazy). Anyway, hope to read the next chp soon.
Hina xXxx
Hina xXxx
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'll cry when Naruto dies. ;[ Or do you ever plan on letting him live, because that'd really make me uberly happy! >DDDD Haha, well, as usual your chapters are pretty well-written. I hadn't had the time to review all of them, but, despite that, I love your sad story. A resigned Naruto is enough to make anyone depressed. Hell, if I wasn't so into the cute-ish uke Naruto, I'd love you. xD No worries, I love the story, even though. I especially love the way you wrote Itachi. So complex, so simple, and yet brilliant all at once. Ftw, man.
~Azl
~Azl
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's strange, even though i know i read this already, for some reason reading this chap here again was practically like reading it for the first time! I always thought it curious Naruto's behavior here but i liked it because it was well balanced in the sense that even though he'd accepted his fate he still acted jovial as if making the best of the situation. He's such a cutey.
Anyway, i suppose reading all the chaps you post here will be like reading it for the first time regardless, and i don't mind one bit! I'll contemplate the fic thing, it's one of those things that if i did it i'd want to do it right, no half-assing and stuff. I'd be certain to look you up though. I like your style so thanx! ^_^
Anyway, i suppose reading all the chaps you post here will be like reading it for the first time regardless, and i don't mind one bit! I'll contemplate the fic thing, it's one of those things that if i did it i'd want to do it right, no half-assing and stuff. I'd be certain to look you up though. I like your style so thanx! ^_^
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! What happens next! Please update soon, I must know!
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love itachi sooooooo much more than sasuke so im glad u made this fic into a itanaru *hugs for u* and i will be looking forward to the next chapter so update soon plz
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like this side of them......keep going please...it will be worth it at the end!
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April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great fantastic! *BASEBALL SONG* BUHDUHDUH DUUH DUN DUUUUH! UPPPDDAAAAAATEEE! hehe =p. i hope sasuke finds out naruto's missing in the next chapter and zomg naruto doesn't luv him back?!?! your horrible in a fantastic, wierd way! =D please update as soon as possib;e this is greatly writtin and has somewat of a good plot!...I LIKE IT! i wuz a lil sad when i read there wouldn't be rape (i have an evil mind, yes , i know) but hey great story anyways i'll be looking out for your story i hope you update fast! ja ne =D
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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Even though i had to have read this like 5 times already, i'm still gonna review!
I always liked the way you explained that whole seal business. That stuff isn't the easiest to write about. In fact, half the time that why i don't write a Naruto fic of my own lol. But i enjoy reading others so much, especially this one. There's something...i don't know...endearing about a vulnerable Naruto, especially with someone like big, bad, Itachi looming over him lol. Anywayz, great job.
I always liked the way you explained that whole seal business. That stuff isn't the easiest to write about. In fact, half the time that why i don't write a Naruto fic of my own lol. But i enjoy reading others so much, especially this one. There's something...i don't know...endearing about a vulnerable Naruto, especially with someone like big, bad, Itachi looming over him lol. Anywayz, great job.