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for Sunlight in a Dark Room

by sunshinemelodi

schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
heh, itachi was only annoyed by sasuke's actions. i still cant wait to see everybody's reactions. love the way itachi got rid of naruto's headband. when they find it some idiot probably say that he abandoned the village and end up getting their ass kicked *cough* by sasuke *cough* for saying that. but i'm letting my mind get ahead of me. looking foward to your next update.
person anonymous pervert
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! can't wait for the next chapter....you are one evil author, that cliffhanger almost killed me. Itanaru fics are so scarce like you all said before and this one is great on both plot and grammar usage....>.< atleast so i could read it anyway lol :)....i like your story(that was...lame! im sorry lmao) so UPDATE SOON!!!
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You posted the story on here!!!!!! Yes, it's the same AnaLaPana83 from TONFA. Glad to see you took up on the suggestion. I'm telling you you won't regret it. Hope you enjoy the reviews here and i'll read the story on here as well. Have fun!
person emp78
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon! Was Itachi 'jealous'? heheheh
person Olivia
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start. I'm definitely interested.
itanaru rule.
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oohhh! now i love it! i cant wait to read about what itachi felt about the kiss scene and when eveybody notices that naru is gone. eagerly looking foward to your next update!
person Anon
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was good for your fist aff story. keep going. i'd asure you more but its late and i'm tired. but still if you need more words of encouragement just email me and i'll do so. k k? *smiles sweetly* well bye for now!
person karin
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm a big fan of itanaru *glomps*. There should be more of that. I'm getting tired of sasunaru. Wonder how this is going to progress? Great start so far.
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sounds good so far. i look foward to your next update.
person emp78
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful start. Can't wait to see what happens next.