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for Sunlight in a Dark Room

by sunshinemelodi

person Mey
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Period.
Need Moar. Period.
Thank Youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu >.<. Final Stop.
person HikariAi
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wohoooo, a new chapter... Hehe, I like how possesive Itachi is at "that" time... I hope the ending will be good... PLEASE update soon, ne... ^_^
person Anon
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh!!! You're back. I've been waiting for you to come out of hibernation.
person JHN33
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm very curious as to what you are going to do with Sasuke. If Itachi is going to deliver Naruto to the "slaughter house" why is he training him. He is already contradicting himself. That is not like him at all. It seems like he has already made his decision subconsciously.
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm.... they can make all the plans they want.. its not going to help. >:) bwhahahahaah
Itachi's not gonna give up what's his. I can picture it now:

"Hey everybody we're here."

"Excellent. I see you still have the 9 tails. Let the extraction begin."


"Uh.. ahem.... about that...." heheheh Change of plans indeed!


I'm so glad you updated. Keep up the great work. (Actually I forgot all about Sasuke kissing him. Was it mentioned? Its been so freaking long, I should really re-read the beginning of this story.)
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm so happy that you've updated a chapter. This is actually one of my favorite fics here at AFF, it's so amazing. Thank you for writing it. I really love the interaction between Itachi and Naruto and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Keep up with the good work and hopefully don't take too long with the updating again ;P
Take care. Hugs
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! You updated. I know how that writer's block is. It sucks. But at least you pulled through. I liked this chap alot. I can't help but feel a little bad for Sasuke as well...anyway, good luck on h next chap.
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I was really loud when I saw you had updated this!! XDD

I'm so glad you got to update it X3

A wonderful add! I love how Sai and Gaara's "friendship" in this, it fits so perfectly. Hahah. Sasuke is so annoying though x.x hopefully he dies or finds someone else to love him cause I can't stand his angsty ass.

I love Itachi so much in this story, normally I'm not a huge Itachi fan but you make him loveable!

Fabulous new chapter!
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait til the next chapter! When you do add to this, do you think that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know? the email is PotionsPet@hotmail.com
person Nipsyo
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi there,
I mourn the fact that either RL, write's block or another fandom seems to have whisked you away from us for a while. :<

Just wanted to let you know that even if it takes a year for you to get to it, I'll be here, hoping for an update to my most favorite ItaNaru fic. I find your Naruto and Itachi to be very believable, staying as themselves even while their deepening relationship eventually changes bits about them. I don't want them fluffy and OOC, that'd just defeat the point of it being ItaNaru if the characters cannot be recognized. Reading about the interactions between them in this fic has really been a joy, because you have made all their reactions feel and seem reasonable and very in-character for them.

I'm ever curious about your plot, where is it all leading to, and what is Itachi going to do once/if they ever meet the rest of the Akatsuki. Likewise with Naruto. You have a very captivating story here. :) I feel very sorry for Sasuke, once he finds out what's happening- if he ever finds out the whole truth? Still, I'm cheering for ItaNaru, so there's only a certain amount of sorry I can feel for the younger Uchiha in this case. :p I wonder if your story is going to have a happy or a sad ending? I'm sure I'll enjoy it anyway, no matter which way it goes.

Thank you very much for the giddy feelings and hearfelt squees this story causes!

Waiting patiently,
Nipsyo