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for Sunlight in a Dark Room

by sunshinemelodi

schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh.My.God. Not only have you satisfied my fix for Itachi/Naruto, but you've done so in a way that was absolutely glorious! And I love the title for the last chapter, btw. That was very clever. Anyway, please update!
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY updated! As soon as i saw this was updated, i put my school work away and read it lol Though i should get back to my other reading. That was quite the chapter, with Itachi getting feels, and naruto saying good-bye to Kyuui, going to miss that fur ball. And with Sasuke and the others on their trail. Can't wait for the next chapter, to find out more ^__^ And yay for doctor Naruto!
person hina88
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you updated!!! xxxxxxxx ^_^ it really cheered me up when i caw it! and the seal! it finally broke i was like oh-oh when it happened and the others were closing in! they were so close to them too that I was worried whether they'd find them with Itachi in that state - I don't think Sasuke would hesitate to kill him as soon as he laid eyes on Itachi :s on the other hand! I loved getting that insight into Itachi's thoughts again, and the way he is with Naruto it's just brilliantly IC!!! That's what gets me so much about this story, everyone is firmly in character I think and i just adds to the story! Really glad for this chapter, thanks so much for updating!

Hina xXxx
person qwerty
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm actually kinda sad that Kyuubi is no more. I'm gkad that you finn=ally got this new chapter posted. Interesting to see Sasuke's reaction when he catches up to Itachi and Naruto.
Update!!
person Anon
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
just to angsty! Want more! but one hell of a great chapter, don't know, why you don't like it!
Gods, I really hope, Ita-chan is ok! Update soon!
person Rosebud
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! I LOVED this chapter! I can't wait to read the next one. Please hurry and update again soon!
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! Update! I'm so happy. I thought this had gotten lost in the internet wilderness somewhere. :) So this was a good development here. It was kinda sexy how Itachi was willing to massage Naruto, well until he had to deal with the problem that came after. I hope their time together isn't interrupted too soon. I kinda enjoy them coming to terms with how they feel about each other. I'm kinda dreading Sasuke's reaction already to all this already......
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was another AMAZING chapter! >> I don't know if you'll remember me but this is the person who USED to be KyuubiXNarutoRULES from TONFA yeah ^__^; Your number one obsessive fangirl AND PROUD OF IT!

^^" Anywho

I loved this chapter and just everything about it...I could go on all day XD

The whole fighting scene was fabulous and your details are still so brilliant that people get sucked right into the story >< I'm gonna go review on TONFA now!

Thank you for updating!
person hpn827
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You haven't updated in a while. I hope you haven't lost your interest with the story. That would be really sad because this is such an awesome story. I hope you'll be back soon.
person hpn
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hope you haven't lost your muse.