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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm in love with your story. It went at just the right pace and left me wanting more. You did such a great job. Itachi and Naruto are my favorite! I love them so much. I hope you update soon. I can't wait. Please update! Great last scene. I loved it! Thanks.
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August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
god i love this story. i cant help re-reading it. there are not enough itanaru out there. i hope u update soon
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July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!! great chapter it was amazing...its about time they did it...i mean you kept us waiting forever. but its cool. pls update soon! i cant wait to read the next chapter
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July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Why haven't you updated? Haha, no no, I know the stress behind getting chapters out...
But let me tell you, I read a lot of Naruto yaoi, with amazingly lemon-scented scenes, and they usually bored me. Yours captured and kept my attention throughly! Yes, I was really enjoying reading it. All that suspense led me up to something very pleasing, don't feel down! It was good. You aren't going terribly slowly (it might just be my impatience that makes it seem like you are) but from a writers POV, it's moving a long quite nicely, and it's well thought out and not wordy in places it shouldn't be. Many writers make that mistake, but within your sentences, you've got a nice way of speeding and controlling the sense of direction (that must not make sense :P )
In the end, my hearts yearns for Itanaru smex NOW! haha, but a pleasure truly, it has been to read this story so far.
You've transformed me from a SasuNaru fan to Itanaru. You managed the impossible! :)
-Take care
But let me tell you, I read a lot of Naruto yaoi, with amazingly lemon-scented scenes, and they usually bored me. Yours captured and kept my attention throughly! Yes, I was really enjoying reading it. All that suspense led me up to something very pleasing, don't feel down! It was good. You aren't going terribly slowly (it might just be my impatience that makes it seem like you are) but from a writers POV, it's moving a long quite nicely, and it's well thought out and not wordy in places it shouldn't be. Many writers make that mistake, but within your sentences, you've got a nice way of speeding and controlling the sense of direction (that must not make sense :P )
In the end, my hearts yearns for Itanaru smex NOW! haha, but a pleasure truly, it has been to read this story so far.
You've transformed me from a SasuNaru fan to Itanaru. You managed the impossible! :)
-Take care
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July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is really great and im usually a hardcore sasunaru fan, but this is so freakin well done! Keep it up
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July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey hey!!!!!! Once again, lovin' the story. i won't ramble like before I just wanted ta say nice job!
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July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Keep it up. Yeah! I wove you!!! Naruto/Itachi fics are my fav, and this fic is now my fav fic ever!!! XD I want to write a Itachi/Naruto fic but I have no ideas for it T_T, But that is okay because I have you to write it for me!! I love this fic. And your a very skilled writer. (unlike me)
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and couple too....Plz keep up the good work.
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooooo goood.
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July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Nice story.
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