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July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn. That was pretty hot.
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July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OKAY, I HAD TO RE-READ IT AGAIN BECAUSE THAT WAS JUST SO DAMN HOT!!!
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July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Wipes massive nose bleed* ....i don't know where to start, so i guess i'll keep this short.
After reading this, my morning is now complete.
Update soon. Seriously. ^_^
After reading this, my morning is now complete.
Update soon. Seriously. ^_^
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg... they've finally done the deed and done it well. my goddness, i cant wait to read about the morning after.
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That was a hell of a sex scene!!! I loved this chapter SO much! And not only cuz the hardcore stuff finaly happende, mind you.
It all happened so smoothly... something that not allways comes OK in a fic (actually most of the times it's like "Sex. Me. Now." and they get started... and it sucks. But this one was just too good ^_______^
On another side, I'm pretty surprised with the flashback. I thaught that Naruto getting Saskue back had been something like Naruto kicking sharingan's ass and back home. It never had occured to me that Sasuke had actually been "persuaded" to go back... it just made thing so much sweeter and... human, than that. I'm seriously happy that you pictured that way ^_________^
Well, that's all, thanks a lot for writing so much awsome stuff, and hope to read you soon (or I'll kidnap you in the Misery-old-fashion way xD)
That was a hell of a sex scene!!! I loved this chapter SO much! And not only cuz the hardcore stuff finaly happende, mind you.
It all happened so smoothly... something that not allways comes OK in a fic (actually most of the times it's like "Sex. Me. Now." and they get started... and it sucks. But this one was just too good ^_______^
On another side, I'm pretty surprised with the flashback. I thaught that Naruto getting Saskue back had been something like Naruto kicking sharingan's ass and back home. It never had occured to me that Sasuke had actually been "persuaded" to go back... it just made thing so much sweeter and... human, than that. I'm seriously happy that you pictured that way ^_________^
Well, that's all, thanks a lot for writing so much awsome stuff, and hope to read you soon (or I'll kidnap you in the Misery-old-fashion way xD)
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
KYAAAA!!! So hot! Luv where this is headed! More please!
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's nice to know what's inside Itachi's head once in a while. I glad he's not unaffected of Naruto. I think their banter is really funny, especially when Naruto calls Itachi "old man" & when Itachi doesn't answer his question. And those little kisses that they share is so hot. I think it's because it feels so right & so wrong at the same time. Also it comes out of nowhere.
thanks much for the update. I have a different name that i use & that's kkk. I wanted to change it because i thought it was cute at first but i forgot about something very important that it can be translated to that i don't want to be affiliated with.
thanks much for the update. I have a different name that i use & that's kkk. I wanted to change it because i thought it was cute at first but i forgot about something very important that it can be translated to that i don't want to be affiliated with.
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally!!! I didn't think it was going to happen soon. That was so perfect & so unbelievably hot (nosebleeds). I think its brilliant how you let Itachi stay w/in his character. This is definitely my favorite chapter. I so want more of this in later chapters. They should go at it like rabbits. Sorry got a little bit carried away there.
Naruto didn't do this to get back at Sasuke right. I guess I shouldn't even be asking that because its not in his nature (in your fic anyway). I guess it came from remembering what happened between him & Sasuke. Now I'm dying to find out what really happen between them. It was really sad reading the first half of the story. Now I don't know whether to be mad at Sasuke or feel bad for him because of the sex between Naruto & Itachi.
Are you by any chance reading the manga. Sasuke is getting really evil in it that i think there's no going back for him anymore. I think he's done too many evil deeds to go back to the way it was.
Anyways, thank you for the update & the length of the chapter. As always I enjoyed it greatly. I really can't wait for the next chapter to see how this is going to change them.
Naruto didn't do this to get back at Sasuke right. I guess I shouldn't even be asking that because its not in his nature (in your fic anyway). I guess it came from remembering what happened between him & Sasuke. Now I'm dying to find out what really happen between them. It was really sad reading the first half of the story. Now I don't know whether to be mad at Sasuke or feel bad for him because of the sex between Naruto & Itachi.
Are you by any chance reading the manga. Sasuke is getting really evil in it that i think there's no going back for him anymore. I think he's done too many evil deeds to go back to the way it was.
Anyways, thank you for the update & the length of the chapter. As always I enjoyed it greatly. I really can't wait for the next chapter to see how this is going to change them.
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Love it.
The story seems very intresting and ite alluring....*drool* Great chapter
I can't wait for the next update, (Hopefully it's soon) veacsue I'm quite desprate to read lol.
It's a brilliant sory, Good work so far
The story seems very intresting and ite alluring....*drool* Great chapter
I can't wait for the next update, (Hopefully it's soon) veacsue I'm quite desprate to read lol.
It's a brilliant sory, Good work so far
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
where to begin?? God that chapter just pulled a whole wild array of emotions from me. The first scene where Naruto was remembering what had happened with Sasuke was heart breaking and man it made my chest hurt in the worst way and even after, the way you were describing Naruto's eyes and the way he was feeling mixed in with Itachi's thoughts on Naruto *sigh* and then THEN I was like O_O whoa... still feeling the affects of 'whoa' btw... that was very well written and with both of them very much in character too and it was HOT so yeah... *takes deep breaths* Thank you so much for the update!!! And can not wait for the next one...(going back to re-read this one)
Hina xXxx
Hina xXxx