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for Sunlight in a Dark Room

by sunshinemelodi

person Anon
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
TEH SMUT IS OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!! =D
person Zigana
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How can Sasuke even think that Naruto would have more than friendly affection for him after what he did to him? I hope Itachi also realizes the big mistake he could be making if he hands Naruto over. See you next time.
person Anon
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was sooooo damn beautyfull!!!!
Sweeter than any candy and hotter than any summer. When the lemon was over, I realized, I held my breath. Can't discripe the feelings I have now... but ist's like icecream I think^^ Must I say anything else? I don't think so.
Again a wonderful chapter... can't wait for the next!
person Rosebud
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow Itachi and Naruto...yeah that was so HOT!!!

Ack, but I can't believe Sasuke killed Naruto though! Damn Sasuke!!! That was so sad...

This was a really good chapter and I look forward to reading the next!

Please update soon, ne?
person Finnel
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You live!!!!
double update... or am i just behind on reading...? oh well...
~squeels!~ sooo yummy! Naruto finally got Itachi to play! ~cries for joy~
for a 'super bad ninja' he seems a bit nieve with the whole 'love' thing... but its sooo cute!
looking forward to what happens next!
ja!
person kaa-san
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn! that was hot! Also, kinda sweet. Can't wait to see what's next for the two.
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe, thank you for update! This was good as well =Ú
Please keep on writing I really want to see next chapter!

P.S. I like your Itachi so much ^^
person ProstoChudo
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's my favorite fic ItaNaru. This chapter is perfect. I'm empressed how relationship are developing. It's a strong moment at the end of story when you are describing changes in Itachi's mind. I 'm waiting next chapter so much! I hope that Itachi stay with Naruto and you make a happy end. Best wishes! (from Russia =) )
person jadetiger
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is the very first pairing of this couple i've ever read and liked. Very well done. please update again soon1
person Mollie
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is definitely my favorite story.
It just blows my mind.