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good start. a bit creepy, but I like Stephen King, John Saul and Dean Koontz, so hey! Update soon, ne?^^

oooo! Good start! Good start! A few grammar and spelling mistakes but nothing I won't be able to skim past. I like the idea of the old haunted house and Gaara being a neighbour lol. Picture this:

*Knock-knock*
Naruto goes to open the door...
"Oh hello, you must be one of my neighbours! I'm Naruto Uzumaki! Have you brought me some cookies?"

"Uzumaki...I can see you when you sleep..."

Naruto's expression: ('o_0)

Sorry, I just couldn't get that outta my head after I watched this movie where this one neighbour spied on the others with a telescope and fell in love with one of them's dog!

Anywayz, did you say Sasuke wanted to buy Hangman's house then destroy it? Or buy Hangma's house and destroy his own house?

Update soon, please!

Ki`Tara

Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.