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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good! I never thought of this pairing, but it was very well written. Ha, ha Sakura! That's what you get for getting full of yourself and taking Naruto for granted. Go Naruto!!
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great work.
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September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I was wondering when an update would happen and here it is. You did a good job. ^_^
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well that was interesting
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was a nice surprise couple. loved it. :D
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter a lot. Although part of me wishes that the lemon were more detailed, I think you made the chapter more meaningful this way. I especially liked the end. Good work. Update soon!
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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Could you write a Naruto/Hanabi fic?
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, really good. But you gotta write an ending. This just screams for an ending. And a lemon? Perhaps?
You could really make this into a long fic, you already pretty much wrote the outline, all it needs is an ending and some length.
Maybe if you don't mind, I could give lengthening it a try?
Please update soon, you rock! XD
~KF~
You could really make this into a long fic, you already pretty much wrote the outline, all it needs is an ending and some length.
Maybe if you don't mind, I could give lengthening it a try?
Please update soon, you rock! XD
~KF~
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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dude where is the LEMON! This is something I could post on a kids forum... anyway the story is well written but I would like to see some threesome action...
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alright someone writing Naru/Hana I hope you continue this. It's entertaining and what can I say I like the pair. Update.