rate_review Reviews

I swear to God, if you don't do a sequel to this I will have to do something drastic! lol Otherwise, you can tell by the way that I want a sequel that this was an awesome bit of porn! I think I loved the most that all the characters were completely, and I mean completely in character! Sakura was nervous, but plucked her courage up anyways. Naruto was all bravado, but really sweet and a little unsure himself. And Sauske was still very distant with many issues, but gave in to his teammates, because they are his and he is theirs. I LOVED IT! SQUEEE! You also did a really awesome job of describing the sex and I loved the humor too. There is always humor in sex, no matter what anyone ever says otherwise and I think you did a perfect job of it. Seriously, this is one of the best threesomes I have ever read! I really hope you consider another one soon and thanks so much for the great smut!

This story totally deserves a sequal. Totally.

That was brilliant in so many ways. The sex was sexy, and everything before the sex was so funny you could have labeled this a comedy fic. Sakura beating Naruto with her panties should be enshrined as a classic moment.

yummy

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

omg, please tell me that you're going to update this one? please? you rock!

that was so funny i loved it great story keep up the good work ...maybe the story should have been called... paid for the night,not the month...lol
i look forward to more of your fics

STUPENDIS that was a neer wordless work of art in motion.Thank you.Thank You!!!!!
GRADES:
A+ originality
A+ writen
A+ creativity
A+ MHA'ness (Mega.Hella.Awesome)
A+ in description
A+ in character sync
And an S+++ in being good ol fashion threesome pleaseing.Also +10 points for mentioning the daisy chain techniqe.

woow, that waas so erotic, arousing, woow... and even more coz naruto, sakura and sasuke are the threesome, plz, continue!!

That jutsu = complete GENIUS! It is so like Naruto and Sasuke to see sex as another way to assert themselves, and it was really clever of Sakura to come up with a solution that both saved their pride and was immensely pleasurable.

I liked the way they just sort of flowed together here, if that makes any sense. Sure, they had their awkward moments, but everyone seemed to know where they stood with one another and were on equal ground. Although this isn't always the case in the series or in fanfic, for this fic it was perfect because not only did it seem to go well with the story's theme of equality and compromise (unless I'm imagining things, lol), but it also let me focus on the hot sex more. Indeed, the sex was very hott, and I very much approve :D Furthermore, I doubly improve of this hott sex because there aren't enough threesomes, especially Team-somes.

Cute line you ended on ;)