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for You Break Me

by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

person Garfield
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"You feel nothing for me

And it kills my soul

You break me without even trying."

Those last three lines nearly killed me...
It is true that those closest to you have the most ability to wound you, in subtle and vicious ways that no enemy ever could. This is beautiful and yet very astute.

(as you can see I'm too slack to even bother logging in, see you over at Y <3
love HSBS @ Y!G)
person laka
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loved it!