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for The child you'll never know

by ClaireBear

person Lulu
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, i wanted to know if you were going to write a sequel to the child you'll never know. If you're not i wanted to ask if i could. I would write it and then give it to you to see if you like it annd if you do then i could post it and if you don't, then i wrote it for personal enjoyment. It'd take me a while to write it though. Thank you!!!!!
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn!! I really like this story to be a multichapter story. I love the pairing!!!! Well I'm going to read your other stories.
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sniff, that's really sad, is there going to be a sequel?
person Casandra
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really wish there were more mpreg with Neji in it I am glad to have found this one thank you makes me want to read a long story with Neji pregnant in it.
person hentai_babe
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG SSSSOOOO sad!!! I love it, write more like it please!!!
person quirk
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy... That was freaking awesome. Awesome plot, good wording, everything was just... wow. I realize you probably ment this as a one shot, but I think- no, I KNOW you could make this into a full story arc. Anyways, thanks for the wonderful read.
person animekid
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
story is deep; I was tripping over the pairing (WTF....) but it's actually angsty in a way.

Really nicely done; Shikamaru is like the to a T and Ino would do something that....horrible. (although if sasuke got Ino pregnant for real...that would be an issue...since that DOES happen.) Still great job on contributing something besides sasuke/naruto (because you get tired of that after the 1million fic you see.)
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! It really does seem that the best ideas for fics come in dreams. I really hope that one day you get another spark of motivation and decide to expand on this story! I really would love to see the lemon between shika and neji and when Ino gets busted :) I think that pregnant Neji would be just TOO cute! *loves mpreg and preg stories*

Wonderful job!

Ezzy
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really, you always write stuff I like, no, really.
This was one of those stories you say "but but... ho...but!...*snif*"
I like it.
person Tyra
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh! How SAD !
But so good! I loved it!
You write such a beautiful stories.
I don't know what to say. So good, but so sad. You so wonderful!

Keep writing you wonderful fics! :3 Love them.