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October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey-I really like this story so far! I hope you update it soon.
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October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Do htey both like each other, or is it Naruto that likes Sasuke? As I was reading it, I thought it was Sasuke that has feelings for Naruto. Anyway this is really good.
I look forward to your next update.
I look forward to your next update.
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October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a great beginning to a story. I'm going to have to keep on eye out for more updates. I lake scene was great!
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October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far... keep it up I'll be checking everyday!!
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October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start, this is the way if most of us could chose would want the battle in the Valley of the End to have happened. You did a wonderful job staying with the it happened along with adding this plot. You really showed a lot of emotions in this chapter. Great work.
littleolmee
littleolmee
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please say that's not the end? you have to keep going! they're so sweet! and cute!! but still totaly guys!
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EEeeeeaaah!!!! Sooo cute!!! I love it! They just make the best couple! How did you come up with this? Your and amazing writer! Ahh Im so excited to read the next chapter! <333 :D
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was such a greaat chapter. i am so glad that sasuke finally told naruto something honest instead of the little trikery games he has been playing on him. but you have to respect naruto for being the first to say i love you. when i read that i was like aww. i can't wait to see how their story unfolds now that they have confessed. is itachi going to be paired with someone or is he going to go after naruto. is naruto the special guest that he was talking about. anyway thanks and can't wait til the next update.
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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
really cute fic! Hope to see more sooN!
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August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think your story is great!!! But I keep wanting to slap the boys, you know, just to get them to 'seeeeee.' But then again, they're male and Naruto is.....Naruto
Thanks!!!! please add more soon
Slave
Thanks!!!! please add more soon
Slave