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for A Yearning Heart

by Greenstages

schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like this chapter. it was kind of interesting to me because now it looks like naruto may be getting the idea that the love he and sasuke share is not only that of friends (yeah) and so he is inch by inch trying to put out more. are you going t be focusing more on their romance during this mission or are you just going to skim it while focusing on developing sasuke and naruto's romance. i can't wait to see the next chapter.
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like this chapter. it was kind of interesting to me because now it looks like naruto may be getting the idea that the love he and sasuke share is not only that of friends (yeah) and so he is inch by inch trying to put out more. are you going t be focusing more on their romance during this mission or are you just going to skim it while focusing on developing sasuke and naruto's romance. i can't wait to see the next chapter.
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHH!!!! Write more!!! I love how you changed it to Sasuke staying with his blond dobe instead of running off to Urochimaru. I can't wait to see how things progress. I think he should grope him a little more >.< Even though I don't like the fact of Naruto being a woman I still love that it's them together and not SasuSaku >.< Eww.... Keep up the good work!!!

~Akira~
person Momo
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome-awesome. More please ^____^!
person emp78
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
They're both so clueless about the other's real feelings. It's cute, but kinda sad, too. Update soon.
person hisoka
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sweet,response
updates?
person Saiou-chan
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damnit, when is Sasuke just going to tell him he's in love with him, and jump him already?
person renzuite
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
zomg more plz yes
person Damp
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love that thought of kissing ten times a day just to make sure that they become familer with each, in a sense. That's also so very, very cute ^^, I wish most men were like that...well...not totally. Sasuke's way to confusing, and I don't think most women would be happy to be with him.

-Damp *But how can you resist him and his sexiness!!*
person hisoka
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww if only naruto could tell he ment it as more than friends
updates?