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for A Yearning Heart

by Greenstages

person macy
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so, so very cute. i can't wait for more. i like the snowboarding chapter. sakura and ino carrying slimfast shakes cracked me up! (hit a sore spot actually XD)
person Kati
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi, i just wanted to say that i love your story and I think the way sasuke tricks naruto is really funny!! xx
person Anon
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope Sasuke and Naruto can pull off being a couple. Hurry with the next chapter!!!
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This last chapter was confusing. Why is Naruto in his Sexy no Jutsu form? The chapter before had him as a male and then this chapter he wakes up female with no explanation. I'm really confused!!
person Devils-Advocate3
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gaara, Gaara, Gaara, Gaara, Gaara, Gaara, Gaara, Gaara, Gaara, Gaara, Gaara, Gaara, Gaara, Gaara, Gaara, Gaara...........GAARA!!!!!!......Please. O and must this be a NaruSasu story? Can't it be a SasuNaru one? Cause personally I think naruto is the 'only', and 'perfect' canident to fill that 'uke' position. (giggle). Plus lately many people have been writing a lot of NaruSasu stories anyway. Huh....Well that my opinion at least.
Anyway hope to see your update soon. Latter.
Kisses ^_~
person roely
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cute story!
person dana
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like how you have potrayed sasuke (he seems very in character). the way he called the girl and broke up with her was sweet. i can't wait to see more of this great story.
person Star
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awsome!!! It was AWSOME!!!!
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
......cars? ski resort? HUH?! I really want to read this, your writing is great and the prologue is fabulous, but you have so many things that are so out of place that you're trying to incorporate into the "real" naruto theme, that I'm finding it impossible. :( I'm sorry, it looks really good. And all the other reviews say it is, so I'm sure it must be. I just wish it was my thing. If you ever write a similar story sans cars and stuff please let me know!
~The Flame Reviews~
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter!! Poor Sasuke loves Naruto but Naruto is so clueless it's funny! Despite Naruto getting hurt, it was funny that he tried to copy Sasuke's moves with the pipe. :)