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by Jelp

schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was...WOW! Sasuke really lost it this time! He doesn't want to lose Naruto to Sakura, he loves him so much he can't take the chance... but hell! he can't kill Sakura ! (not that i like sakura anyway who does? ;-p) Naruto will really HATE him if he does!!! STOP SASUKE!!!
person fujinakaheero
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok.. still no update.
I'm getting anxious here.

I must know what happens next! *shakes fist*
I personally love that you made this into a multi-chapter fic, btw.
Just thought you should know.

SO.. if you don't update soon, I shall boycott this story so you get no more readers or reviews! *insert insane laugh here*
..
...
ok so that I don't have that much power, but.. it's a threat none the less!
T_T
So please.. new chapter soon?
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sasuke killed sakura now thats a twist
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm not a Sakura basher but I really hope that whatever Sasuke's doing (the dipshit XD) will take her out of the picture so he can be happy with Naruto. This is one of those stories that doesn't seem like everyone can be a winner so you just have to take sides. Sasuke may be crazy but Naruto loves him more than Sakura and is happier with him so I have to take his. >.> Loved the chapter! Can't wait for the next one. =3
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I will definitely have to read The Agreement..
but back onto this story.
Started reading it last night and just finished reading it (with breaks in between of course)
But I must say I am in love with this story so far.
Gah! The cliffhanger though is going to kill me now.
I'm going to end up checking back every day just for another update.
But I love this take on the demon's chakra, no one really touches the points of what the demon's chakra can do to Naruto, so this story really gives good insight to that, which makes it all the more appealing.
I even like the usage you have of the yin and yang, it works very well with this story.
So, you have another loyal reader and I plan on reviewing for now on, on your new chapters :D
And again, this is a really awesome and really well written story, so keep it up ;)
until next time,
Ja ne
Fujinakaheero.
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Did Sasuke kill her? I have to say, I hope so but it would only be good if no one ever knew about it! Can't blame Sasuke for not wanting to lose the love of his life! :D
person Allys
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit Sasuke's completely fucking lost it. Did he just try to kill Sakura?? Honestly??? Shit!! Dumb fuck! And things were going so well. Stupid... Grrrr!!!! LOL, This story infuriates me!! In a good way XD. Drama drama drama *shakes head*. No really that was such a bad freaking choice. And didn't Shizune tell Naruto?? You left so many questions with this chapter *sighs*. "Patience is a virtue." I'm just gonna keep telling myself that until you update XD. LOL, the image of Naruto and Sasuke's lives together was really freaking marvelous. If only Sasuke-bastard wasn't a Psycho!! *sighs heavily* Thanks so much for the update honey. I'll make sure to skip on over and check out the Agreement. *nods happily* I'm pretty sure I'll lvoe it XD.
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh damn! No offense to Sakura and all, but I hope she realizes that Sasuke and Naruto were meant to be together, even more so than herself and Naruto! If she really loved Naruto, wouldn't she WANT him to be happy? And as much as I'm totally rooting for Sasuke, even when he's in his dark side...knocking Sakura out like that after nearly giving her an heartattack was a bit much! Lol! I hope he doesn't do anything crazy and really just talks things out with her!

-yuurimaoh@gmail.com
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke, Sasuke, Sasuke... when are you going to learn that Naruto doesn't like it when you make his decisions for him.
I can't wait to see what he does next.
As for the comparison... I love this story and have little doubt that I will feel the same about "The Agreement" once it really gets started. Your Sasuke is just so awesome in both of them. Stoic, arrogant... I wish I could keep my Sasuke that way, but he ALWAYS goes mushy whenever Naruto is around. Drives me crazy!
I can't wait for more of both of them!
:) M
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke killed Sakura!! It's mean of me and I'm not a Sakura-hater, but YAY!! KEEP YOUR MAN, SASUKE!