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by Jelp

person mango
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i was really excited when i saw that you suddenly updated which is why i can't believe that i feel so crappy after reading ch11. :(
i'm surprised~! this must be a dream or something right (referring to ch11's ending)? it reminds me of School Days which ended just as horribly with more gory detail. School Days also had to do with an affair (though the relationships were not developed so i'm not sure if you can call it an affair), but both female characters started doing crazy, violent things to each other. ughhh i won't talk about it anymore. i read it on onemanga.com while on a hunt for a short, pleasant manga series. it was short, but was not pleasant at all :( oh man.


i enjoyed this chapter until sasuke had gone crazy. i'm also really upset that you killed sakura. suddenly this fanfiction feels incredibly dark. i was so caught up with wanting naruto to accept sasuke that i didn't pay much attention to the haughty atmosphere around sakura and sasuke. AHH... this is very much like School Days. i can't get School Days out of my head with this turn of events. the build up to "this point" in both stories are very similar.

i'm not looking forward to the next chapter as i normally do after updates for this story..., but i do want to see where you're going.
person kati
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I am so in love with this story. Every chapter is better than the last and the plot constantly keeps me on the edge of my seat; your skills in creating tension and action are amazing. I love how this is all playing out and the dynamics of all the relationships. Thanks for updating! xxx
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yes! kill sakura please for the love of god. ive never hated her this much!! awesome story <3
person tash1021
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O____O did sasuke kill sakura?
i love it story
please just date when u get the chance
person animelover
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well j, gotta tell ya, ILOVETHISFICTODEATH!!!!! even better than agreement, i must say. the way you have sasu going mad is quite stimulating and an interesting take on the situation. you see that in sasunaru fics, but your description was beautifully done. yeah, i know, i'm totally weird that way. ;-)

keep up the good work! can't wait to see naru go ballistic when he finds out sasu hurt saku (please let him go ballistic, even if it's out of guilt or something!)
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh...my...god.

I was absolutely not expecting that. When Sasuke was thinking about drastic measures to take to ensure Naruto was his, I didn't think THIS was it! Sakura's not dead is she?

Even though I wish she was...It would kind of ruin the story.

Can't wait to read the next chapter! Evil Sasuke scares me.
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke is crazy! Did he kill Sakura?! yeesh! I cant wait for more!
And I do like your fic the Agreement! Its awesome!
person JJ
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was an awsome chapter. i like where u are going with sauske wanting naruto to himself. is he realy going to kill sakura . let me know keep me posted.
person LadyWolf
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! Wow!!!! If Sasuke wasn't a damn coward in the beginning he and Naruto would be together!! I've never been a Sakura fan, never! But in this case, I'm glad she found out how to cure the blonde and sad that Sasuke is being a psycho. Naruto is going to be the loser when all this is over. I can see him now, sitting in a little white room, he's wearing a straight jacket mumbling, '2 loves 1 heart....' Poor Naruto....:o(*
person hpn
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! I mean, Sasuke how can you do that to Naruto (can't stop grinning). Seriously though, the only thing I have against that, is Naruto's reaction. I really don't care (hate) about Sakura but she is his precious person & I don't want Sasuke to look bad.