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by Jelp

person Allys
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww you're so sweet *huggles* And this was so freaking fantastic!!! LOL, I guess that translates to - I liked this chaoter too XD. Finally!!! Gods that was Hott! the little fight straight into sex and all the really really good stuff. I'm so freaking they finally talked and admitted some stuff. i mean they're not quite there yet but they're well on their way XD. I love that Naruto came when Sasuke said he loved him. I loved that Sasuke told him he couldn't get off unless he knew he were enjoying it. And gods the licking XD, I can't wait till they get that seriously underway. You rock my world sweetie *MUAH*. I'm so happy right now. And OMG, I almost forgot because of the hawtness!! But Tsunade!!! *dies* I think I love her XD. I mean damn, that was kind of low, and scary that she did that, but XD. It still makes me happy!! LOL, I'm such a nerd *Huggles u* Thank you soooo much for the update love!! I hope it happens again soon ;) ♥
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Indeed, I adore this chapter as much as you like it too! These are the emotions I love to read, such intense, fervent and eloquent emotions flowing between two individuals that spark each other’s eternal fire. Plus the tone in this chapter really did put me right away (well practically all the way through the chapter) into a cheerful mood. Its creative plotting like this that keeps me coming back to read more! Keep up the excellent work (and also the great mood in this story so far between Sasuke and Naruto), jelp!

~SasuNaru723~
person ritsukakun
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh!!! So hot!!! Your fic emotion me more and more! Sorry for my bad english...
person tash1021
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay sasuke and naruto are together ^.^
but for how long...?
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it, as usual! <3 I can't wait for the shit to hit the fan with the Sakura situation. >.< Drama, drama, drama. (Oh and this chapter was extremely HOT!!! <3)
person Rachel
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your a genius! I'm amazed at how you came up with the logical facts of this story. And on top of that, being able to make it logical and enjoyable. You must have put a lot of effort into this story, and I, as a reader, am extremely appreciative of how great a writer you are. Thank you for putting out this great story for everyone to enjoy!
person Vylest0
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Dear Sasuke finally at least got some type of requited 'affection'--and he's soo happy! I myself have to note how I really adored the 'surface feel' of this chapter in the partake of Sas/Naru's 'things-to-thoroughly-discuss' list (obviously on Naruto's). Personally, I got the feeling that it's not over on the emotional rollercoaster for these two (I hope not! XD ) but rather this chapter has opened up an arc to put both of the guys on fair grounds--note I don't necessarily believe even grounds, just squared away.

Anywayz, forget my ramblings. I luv this story as always and it's flow a lot and I am so glad to see that you updated when u did. I was worried there for a moment...:) PLZ update soon!!!!! *teary eyed*
person gaara89
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update soon!
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
eek!

Good job, hun!

It was fantastic, and I'm excited for the next chapter!
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was such a great chapter! Both of them seem so happy, even though Naruto is probably feeling guilty about Sakura. The sex scene and all that came before it and after it, was wonderful! :)