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by Jelp

schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG... finally... finally... real communication. I have marked my calendar and shall be celebrating this day for many years to come.
Oh... and it was super hot. And those boys... written wonderfully.
Looking forward to more as always.
person hpn827
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are the best.
person Neil
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been waiting for this for so long. I was really feeling bad for Sasuke. I really wanted him to have Naruto. I think it worked really good in your story that Sakura left because it gives Naruto a change to think things over without the guilt & distraction. I don't blame Sakura for punching the living daylights out of the Hokage. Also if Sasuke wasn't such a coward it wouldn't have had to go this far.
person Anon
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wahhhhh!!!!! So sexy I loved every minute of it. Funny thing is I had started reading this story a while back and then I stopped and I suddenly decided to check to see if it was updated and surprisingly it was. Although I had to read several other chapters to catch up, but I was so happy. It is a good story and can't wait to see how this turns out for all of them. I hoping Naruto goes for Sasuke, but that's just wishful thinking.
person Anon
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely love the story. Don't stop!
person Ivy
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter as usual! I loved the interaction between the two. Also, very sneaky of Tsunade... I actually didn't see that setup coming ^_^ Can't wait for more!
person littleolmee
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! Finally. Naruto and Sasuke together and Naruto was accepting. Hooray, first hurtle down and now only a few hundred more to go. Nice lemon, figures there would be a fight; hee, hee so them. Hmm, Tsunade is playing a dangerous game but, after all her losses in her life I can understand not wanting to loose Naruto at whatever cost and he needs Sasuke to live while he doesn't Sakura; I can understand her thinking. Sigh, if only you weren't dealing with a sometimes intellectually challenged person on one hand and on the other a somewhat emotionally challenged person. Just is never going to make for an easy time. Love how this is going, thank you for that peek in at Tsunade and Shizune, I think that really added to things. Love that Sasuke finally sucked it up and admitted. I knew Naruto would never keep what Tsunade told him about Sasuke to himself and he even offered to help him right off the bat. What a good guy; even if he was grossing himself out on it, hee, hee. Keep up the great work. Take care.

littleolmee
littleolmee2002@yahoo.com
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i haven't seen this story in a while so i was really haopy to have a chance to. i love your stories and have to say that evn if you wote about a hundred year old naruto running from sasuke i would proably read it, i love your style of writing so much. i especially like how you got rid of the wife and and made the fifth and her loyalities a little off. i would have bet money that she would have been routing for sakura. i can't wait to see the next chapter.
person jj
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
jelp u know u havent lost ur tuch so keepit up i love this one so how is it going to turn out is naruto going to be with sauske and leave sakura or is he going to have both is i see u got naruto to admit that he has felling for sauske and he dont know what to do so let me know what ur planing for this story and keep me posted for the next chapter and let me know when any of ur new storys are out and any new chapter u r posting till then later
person cocojin
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you never cease to amaze me. I have to say I loooooved the last two chapters! They were so amazing because I didn't see it coming! I really like how you wrote Naruto's realization. You are a god, Jelp!