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it was awesome!!! woot! Good job..

*sniff* I just feel really bad for Sasuke =/

i loved this chap, i am glad everything is out in the open. i can't wait to see the nex chapter.

Love it/Hate it... LIKE MARMITE!!! =D I didn't really like this much actually... I don't know why, I think it was the atmosphere or something, or perhaps I am just in a strange mood...?

I loved the plot all throughout this particular chapter and most especially loved how Naruto was aiming to hide his true reactions as Sasuke was trying to make love to a very distant Naruto. Now Naruto’s heart’s being pulled in two directions. Ahhh, if only Naruto wasn’t already married to Sakura, then Naruto and Sasuke’s relationship would have for sure taken an immediate jump start. I definitely want to see where you lead the next chapter to. You’ve drawn me to a point of utter patient curiosity. And what fast update timing for this chapter! I was so happy to read more of your material! Plus I did like the whole exploration of Yang and Yin. I too am just now getting into researching the keys to Yin and Yang in my other spar time.

Superb job on Chapter 9, jelp!! ^0^

*gushing tears* Oh my gosh...the moments between Sakura and Tsunade and Sasuke and Naruto when the truth was completely revealed...it made my heart ache so BADLY! x.x And though I ADORE Sasu/Naru/Sasu and I can barely stand to read Sakura paired with Sasuke or Naruto (at least not well-written)...I can't help but understand Sakura COMPLETELY in this fic. Almost makes me want her marriage with Naruto to last...if it weren't for the fact that Sasuke is alive and trying to save Naruto's life and is totally in love with him. Sasuke may have handled that horribly, but I'm STILL backing him up 100%!!! I still feel more sorry for him than ANYONE else in this fic, therefore I wish him the most happiness out of anyone else in this fic. Sakura and Naruto had their times to be happy, it's about time Sasuke got some happiness!

can't wait to read the next chapter!!!1 Keep up the good work!!!!!

Interesting turn of events! I wouldn’t have guessed Sakura would end up getting that pissed with Tsunade when Tsunade and Sasuke were only trying to be discreet with what Sasuke was doing to Naruto. I was little confused if when Sasuke told Naruto everything if that meant Sasuke mentioned the reason why Naruto needs Sasuke’s sperm and all; that Sasuke never intended to rape Naruto despite the sex being unknown to the blonde. Hell if I were in Naruto’s position I’d be grateful that my best friend was keeping me alive, although I’d be pissed that he had to do it so secretly without telling me (that kind of screws things up horribly as seen within the story). I still like this fic of yours. It’s got a new and unique kick to it that makes me to eager to read more till the very end. I’m very interested to see what the next chapter will turn out like, in which is very close to the ending right? Or was this going to be the last chapter? If so, will there be an epilogue continuing after – like either when Sakura finally returns to see how things are or seeing how Naruto behaves while Sakura’s gone and if Naruto slowly progresses back in trusting Sasuke?

no no... i admit i dont really like it at all......wow....everythings so crazy. and.....why does it feel like he won't choose sasuke in the end? aww shit... i'm not the type that can read that type of ending so if you can ....let me know somehow?

le sigh

her being gone permanently would be SO helpful :(

i want to see how you pull together sasuke's and naruto's next meeting. sasuke can't continue to use his eyes, so i'm interested in which direction that will go, as well as the general interaction between the 2.

thanks for the update

Oh dear... where do I fall? Did I love it? Did I hate it?
Okay here's the thing and I believe that I have grown as a person in the last five minutes because I can admit freely that I don't like Sakura. There. I said it. I don't like her. She makes me throw up in my mouth a little bit and so when I have to read about her undying love for Naruto (And, oh god, his for her) and how she's all a big self sacrificing paragon of beauty and strength... well, let's just say that I want to find a bus and run her down.
Okay, that said. Obviously this was an AMAZINGLY written chapter if I'm that worked up about it... right. Amazing. The emotions from all those involved were almost overwhelming. I'm glad the secret is out and as suspected I feel for everyone (Even Sakura... and that kills me) because everyone was hurt from this one.
I look forward to more! Thank you for this one.