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by Jelp

person Mort
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I didn't know what to think of it when I read the summary-

I was pleasantly surprised-
Honestly I am all about Sakura dropping into a hole some place- But, you've written her in a very believable way- I'm almost torn-

Looking for your next chapter-
person Allys
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is some crazy shit XD, LOL. I don't even know what to think anymore. But I definitely can't say it's not interesting XD. Holy crap... that was certainly... unexpected, LOL. I'm thrown. I'm sitting here still reeling and just trying to take it in. I have no idea where you're going with this? Is it still going to be SasuNaru? or is it gonna end up SasuNaruSaku o.0?? I guess I'll just have to wait and see. I'm glad you got your groove back and hope the next chapter just flows *hugs*.
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg! *eyes wide*

That was such a turning point..and I loved it!

Ooh, So now that Sakura's out of the picture, Sasuke can claim Naruto's heart! (and body)

muahaha.

*glomps!*

schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am one of the people who absolutely loved this chapter! Wow! Sakura...is a girl after my own heart! Update soon!
person littleolmee
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay I'm in the 'love it' category. What a twist! Just what is going on within the ANBU? Or could it be Root? Will they be able to clear Sakura's name? What about what Sasuke's way of keeping Naruto alive? Is Naruto going to continue to resist or after talking to Tsunade come to accept it? He often seems to have these not going to accept something and fight against it only to finally accept what he has to do. It seems Sasuke is loosing his Sharingan. Will he be able to use it to make Naruto compliant any more or will it have to be the normal way from now on; perhaps Naruto would rather know what is going on? Obviously Sasuke will be trying to woo Naruto while Sakura is gone. How is this going to affect Naruto and Sakura? Will the love Sasuke has for Naruto be returned in time or will it always just be a mission to save Naruto's life? Oh as if I wasn't already interested in this story now I've got a renewed one! Keep up the great work, love your story. Take care.

littleolmee
littleolmee2002@yahoo.com
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! This story is soooo great!!! Now that naruto knows and can't ignore what sasuke is doing to him, he will surely feel broken and empty... I really want them to be together in the end though, please! I wonder how Sasuke will explain the chakra problem to naruto, that's to say if naruto gives him a chance to explain. I wanna know what happens next!!!
person snowren
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic!!! It's really hot and dramatic!
Sasuke and Naruto makes a great couple
mmmm.....would the seme/uke roles change in the future?
person Ivy
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!!! I just reread chapter 7 again as I wish for an update :-)
person jj
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yes jelp we still love u and i like where u left us hanging i hope that this fic is going to be realy good from this point on and i hope naruto exsepts sasuke as a love as well and i hope that sasuke dusent kill himself. well let me know when the next chapter is done
person Ivy
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!! Love this story :-)