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person Anon
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
angst is right. That plain out...hurts!!! Man...man...OUCH!
I still want Sakura to be ripped apart and torn to shreds by Naruto's affection for sasuke. gosh i hope you'll upate soon.
Maybe I'm sadistic but I have enjoyed reading Sasuke's torment over confessing what he has done to Naruto and in this next chapter, oh, I can't wait. You're a wonderful writer and no matter what exciting events you put in your stories, they seem to characterize naruto well and you must have a great liking for him....in perhaps a different way. I love him too!!! He should be happy.
person mango
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dragon695, although you pose valid points, you have to let the writer due his/her thing~! i think she's successful in protratying each character in this fanfic as well as her other works. and unlike many other writers >_> she respects her audience. i dislike that people try to bend whatever storyline a writer has in store for their audience to that person's ideal work for certain pieces...before they've been written for public view. >___> that's all i have to say.
person caidanu
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I feel that I need to review this one as well becasue I have been reading it and I'm thoroughly enjoying. I actually feel kind of sorry for Sasuke; damn Naruto will probably try to kick his ass for catching him in the act but I think in the end he'll maybe understand the curcumstances. Hmmm I think that maybe Sakura may not be quite so livid once she talks with Tsunade. Great work.
person mango
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
a cliff hanger! this makes me want to qq all the way to mexico TT_____TT i can't wait!!!!
person Jave-chan
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ive been reading your story for quiet a while and this is my first review and like WHOOAA THIS CHAPTER!!!! OMG Naruto was so totally naruto, i mean his obliviouness and in the end his anger!
Oh god, i hope everything turns out right in the end, i want Sasuke to be happy and Naruto to forgive him and hopefully Sakura too! but wow, this chapter was amazing, i cant wait to see what happens next because i want to see how Sakura reacts to what Tsunade has to say!!!
KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!! ^_^
person Nikana
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...wait...wait...am still shocked...wait, I have to close my mouth yet...wait...!!!OH MY GOD¡¡¡¡¡ you are so mean, you leave it in the best part and ... the sharingan gone wrong, and he finds out the cruelest way around, and am so waiting for next chapter.I've been reading all along the update "date" but this chapter its just great, YOU ARE A GODDESS OF THE NARUTOVERSE!!!!
update soon please^^
person kati
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
//D (twitch,twitch) Thankyou for updating so quickly, this is the best chapter yet! I... I c-can't... I CAN'T WAIT!!! XD THIS IS SO COOL!!!
person Anon
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yes... but ill cry if you dont update soon!
person Sayuri
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Naruto's such a dufus. Poor Sasuke, he was really trying so hard to tell him. And can't wait to see Sakura's reaction when she finds out through Tsunade. I hope you don't make Sasuke blind from using the Sharingan because that's sad T_T. I want Sasuke and Naruto to sort everything out and have hot make-out sessions, but the angst is good.

Can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon.
person Allys
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy mother of all things Frustrating *beats head on wall*. (That was really hot btw) I'm going to die!! *Loves all over you* Of course I still love you!! That was one hell if a way to find out. But I'm really happy!! Cause now it'll haunt him! Damn I sound like a sadist don't I? XD Too bad! I'm enjoying this wayyyyyy too much *happy dances*... But the title of the next chapter worries me. Is Naruto going to run off still in the confusion?? And before Sasuke tells him that he loves him and explains properly??? God he needs to be huggled. At least maybe now Sakura will understand and quit cock-blocking.Damn woman the whole time earlier when Naruto refused to believe them I couldn't help thinking that if she had just kept her god damn mouth Shut! This would not have been so much of a problem!! Maybe Naruto would have listened to Sasuke *sighs* LOL, you've got me all wrapped up in this!! Please please update soon!!! I'm dying to know!!! And LOL, just so you know (in case I wasn't clear enough) This was more than worth the wait!!! I love this story, you're doing a fantastic job!! (As usual :D) *huggles* ♥ *mwah*