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I thought this story was amazing. I haven't seen a plot like it, and it's you that's brought me round to thinking NaruSaku is actually sweet because you write it incredibly well. As for the SasuNaru, well you write that even better! Such a shame that Mine has finished now, though I think I'll be reading it again at some point. :3

[This isn't my account, my e-mail is: red891@hotmail.co.uk - even though you don't have to reply. xD]

.....Well! I'm glad it sort of ended up all right. The past few chapters made me so melancholy, but this one left me feeling a sense of closure. Great job and I look forward to more stories and updates of current stories by you in the future. Thanks for sticking this out to the end and finishing it! It was great to not be left hanging. Good luck in all your endeavors.

Oh my goodness. *breathes* Emotional roller coaster is right. After so long, it's finally finished. I don't know where to begin. I think I'll start with Sakura's resting in peace. She deserves it, and we all hope her heaven was as happy as you described it or more. She was an innocent and it was sad/shocking/heartbreaking to see her murdered so suddenly without having the chance of settling things once and for all with Sasuke and Naruto...or moving on, or finding peace with them somehow. Tsunade's case was very disturbing...had me completely distraught for a while there, but I'm glad she's slowly recovering her senses. Shizune pissed me off with her stunt of telling Naruto that Sasuke was the one behind Sakura's death. I, like Sasuke, refuse to forgive her for that. Sasuke finally got his happy ending...which is the one character I was supporting ALL the way, even though he was dumb enough to let Sakura steal Naruto from right under his nose. I still supported him. He got what he wanted/needed...and Naruto is happy to be by his side. So, I couldn't be happier. *sigh* I'm relieved, I guess, and happy to have finished reading the end of this fic at last. Thanks for sharing.

-yuurimaoh@gmail.com

How cute, you even gave Sakura her own heaven. And even if Tsunade was crazy she thinks she's with everyone she loves.

Jelp, i really, really love you! i know you must have many other marriage proposals from better candidates, so i'm not gonna waste your time with mine. i just love you and your fics, all of them. really, i do. but especially this story, it was... i don't have words for it. yes, but that's mostly because my english is as crappy as you could ever imagine. just know that we enjoyed MINE immensely. i APPRECIATE you, JELP, and your MINE, as one of the rarest jewels in the word-crafting art found in aff's l'ouvre.

Thanks for the wonderful ending!! Though you did have me worried at the beginning of this chapter!! :D I really love this story and it will always be one of my favorite all-time SasuNaru stories! Thank you for writing this and sharing it! :)

This was beautiful and intense and just. . . amazing. I loved it.

I'm glad you put the warning in at the top, because when I first started reading, I got a little scared, sort of pissed, etc. If Sakura seriously ended up being with Sasuke and Naruto, that would be insane. The thing that you said it felt like heaven, and because that was what it was, was genius(did that sentence make sense?). I think that was the best part of this chapter. The rest was okay, it was kind of a wrap up. I don't see how else you could have really made it any better, but there wasn't much spark? Anyways, this story was great. I love your Sasuke. But I really love the Agreement! If I haven't expressed that enough in my reviews of that story, I LOVE IT! Keep writing! (even though I know you already wrote The Agreement..)

I'm terribly sad to see this story go but I know that there will be more wonderful stories to read from you and in a way I'm happy to know you'll have time to create some new ones. What I liked about this story was the struggle Sasuke faced between doing what he had to do and how those things weighed on his mind and heart. I liked how you presented his trouble with doing what he was told he had to do to save his most precious person. This wasn't one of those situations that had a clear cut distinction of right and wrong, many times the things that happened in this story blurred those lines. I think that you presented this story in a wonderful way, I enjoyed all the plot twists, the way your presented the characters, and how things turned out. Thank you for all your hard work in creating, writing, and posting this story. Please pass my thanks on to your beta's for their hard work as well; they are often forgotten by us readers and do play an important part for authors. Also thank you for the emailing list you have created to alert readers that you have posted, it is a very kind thing for you to do and I know the other readers also appreciate it. I look forward to seeing more of your works in the future, take care.

littleolmee
littleolmee2002@yahoo.com

Oh no... it's over. It was so good. I loved every minute of it. Even those minutes when I bit my nails and set on the edge of my seat hitting 'refresh' every five minutes hoping that another chapter would just appear.
I never would have guessed the outcome and love it all the more because of that.
I won't lie... when I read the beginning of this chapter I was like "Whaaaa???" but, I'm glad that Sakura's heaven is so beautiful.
Oh my god... the end, with the limp. Priceless.
And then the "I love you's"... I don't need to tell you that I live for that stuff.
Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful story.
:)M