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by Jelp

schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you have my email now please send me a message when you update please?!
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL, yeah, you are still loved despite leaving the ending of this chapter hanging like this. :D Well, Naruto can't deny it now! I wonder how Naruto is going to handle this. :)
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohmigod!off course we still love you..that was sooooo good. ^_^ me like!
person susanna
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope that this was no permanent damage to Sasuke's eyes!
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Due to the laws of Karma, I don't believe it's even remotely unfair that you hit me with a cliffhanger. However, due to those same laws, it's also not unfair for me to fall to my knees, tears streaming down my face while screaming "WHY!!! Curse you! Curse you!"
Naruto's denial was heartwrenching. I adore how you have protrayed his devotion to Sasuke. He'd turn the world upside down to keep Sasuke as a friend. Built himself a houseboat and float the Nile for the rest of his days if he had to. Brilliant chapter. Can't wait for the next.
person animelover
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooooo, sasuke's in trouble! dang, i was almost mad at naruto for being so thickheaded but he got it in the end. i'm curious about naruto's illness and how it came about or what the illness is.

until next time!
person mls
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you little bastard

:O

good chapter, hey Naruto can't complain. It seems like he enjoyed it AND Sasuke did tell him
person SasuNaru723
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First of all, I’m so thankful that you emailed me a reminder that the 7th chapter was out. That was very thoughtful and it just made my day end perfectly. Besides that pointer, the 7th chapter was really, really good. I loved how Naruto got to feel Sasuke around and inside of him near the ending of their love making (this will probably help convince Naruto to consider Sasuke a good potential lover maybe). Marvelous job on this chapter and I’m guessing the end is nearing? Your writing and stories are always pleasant to read, so I’m sure the ending won’t be a disappointment (and maybe a happy one, ne?). I look forward to the next chapter when you have it ready!
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! i loved it! finally Naruto knows, hey he enjoyed, i wonder if ur going to have naruto kill sasuke