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The story is interesting, if a little far fetched. Still, you've pulled it off. So far. That being said, I have some rather pointed suggestions (sorry if they seem demanding). As much as I hate Sakura sometimes, I think she is the person in the RIGHT in this story. Second only to Naruto, of course. I love Sasuke x Naruto, as you well know from my comments on your other stories. I absolutely despise NaruHina and NaruSaku. However, I know one thing about Naruto. NARUTO NEVER GOES BACK ON HIS WORD! NEVER! EVER! EVER! He wouldn't care if it caused him all the pain in the world. He wouldn't do that. That's just who he is. That is why you can't allow him to dump Sakura for Sasuke, no matter what. He made a promise in marrying Saukura. He won't do it. It hurts me to say this, but Sasuke will just have to settle for being second best. He had his chance and he blew it. Life isn't always fair for gay people, this I know all too well. And please don't make Sakura stupid by her "realizing" that she had to dump Naruto. That isn't the way things work, especially if there are genuine feelings, which they both seem to share. This isn't some unhappy sham marriage, it seems quite happy and satisfying for both partners. There is no reason why she can't stay married to Naruto. Obviously Naruto is bisexual and enjoys sex with her (even if it isn't as "good" as Sasuke) as she does with him. I'm sorry but I just can't accept that she would just "conclude" that she must give him up to Sasuke. Also, I have very little sympathy for Sasuke. He's acting like an asshole. He should have told Naruto the truth in the beginning. Like I said, Sasuke had his chance and now he'll have to live with his decision. At worst, he'll only be allowed to perform his duty. At best, maybe after sufficient groveling and the full truth, Sakura *might* be willing to share as long as she can watch. That is really the only reasonable way to end this fiction. I know it seems so demanding, but I feel very passionate about this type of situation. I've seen it happen before (sans rape/illness) and, trust me, it never ends happily for the Sasuke-type. I guess all I'm saying is please keep it real. Great story, otherwise.

P.S. - If Sakura agrees to share, Sasuke can be "punished" by being forced to bottom for Naruto. An even better idea would be to have Sakura henge into a man and also "punish" Sasuke. Or better yet, add some clones! Yes, I think that would be fitting for Konoha's #1 asshole. Don't you?

I love where the plot is going so far. Of course it will be even far more interesting to see Sakura’s and Naruto’s initial reaction to the truth in the next chapter. Naruto seems too attached to Sasuke that even when he finds Sakura’s statement of Sasuke ‘raping’ him to be partly true (all because Sasuke is NOT raping Naruto), I suspect Naruto will be more so in a state of silent shock and maybe become a little distant… but he’ll have to eventually take Sasuke back and understand Sasuke’s reasoning. I really love this story; its so different but in a very good way! Definitely one of a kind!

I think it's stupid that sasuke waited so long, but i can understand that he didn't want naruto to chose him over sakura for just that reason. It would kind of be hard your life or happiness when you only have a year to live. me it would probaly be die happy, but that's just me. please post next chap. soon. =)

Looking forward to the next chapter.

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Ah! The suspense is killing me! (headthinkdeskheadthinkdesk)

Okay so that's just EVIL!!!!! Death by cliffie!! I wanted to hit Sakura so freaking bad for telling him. I mean yeah, I'd want him to know too, but I'd have sat both their asses down and told Sasuke, "you tell him right now or I will." To go behind his back like that just seems wrong. As evidenced by Naruto laughing in her face. I was really relieved about that though... :(. I want to know how he's going to react!! Gods, I really really need you to update. Like right NOW!!!!!!!!! Please?????!!!!!

Well, the truth came out on Sakura's end but Sasuke still has to tell the complete truth to Naruto. I'm glad this is finally coming out!! I wonder how Naruto is going to react. I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

I love the way you wrote this story. I love the science behind why he had to do that. Now I can't wait to see what will happen next. How will he really react and how will Sasuke tell him? We'll see next time on Dragon Ball Z!!! LoL J/K Keep up the great work!

~Akira~

I can't wait for the next chapter to find out how Naruto reacts. Great Work!