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person Allys
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL, Okay so I loved this chapter XD. Sorry I couldn't get to it sooner *hugs* Naruto was adorable and I got kinda nervous for a second there with him lying in the bed and everything XD. I was kinda hoping Sasuke would just come out and tell him. But LOL, next time for sure it seems :). I'm really excited about that, I have no idea how Naruto would react, so I'm dying to see what you think. I can't hardly wait XD. I love this story as twisted and sort of creepy as it is if I think about it too hard, LOL, somehow I think that just makes it better XD. And well, LOL the fact that it's Naruto and Sasuke *fangirly heart thump* Thanks so much for the update. I know it's the middle of exams and everyone's really busy, so I greatly appreciate it. Good luck with finals and everything *hugs* Ja♥
person yummy
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is good keep it going up-date soon
person SasuNaru723
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww! Sasuke got to snuggle with Naruto! That was so cute! Thanks for updating chapter 5 so soon! The next chapter for sure sounds like it will be quiet the interesting turn of events if it’s named “The Truth.”
person Anon
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Next Chapter: The Truth

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i just REALLY hope that it is sasuke who tells naruto the truth. i really REALLY hope so
person kati
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for emailing me with the link to the updated chapter, I wouldn't have found this otherwise! Things are progressing, developing... Oh, the drama! The suspense! lol I liked Naruto's POV and his reasoning about the situation. I really REALLY have no idea how Naruto is going to react, he is just so unpredictable! I can see the sasunaru-ness happening, Sakura's feelings about their relationship, etc. Sasuke is so cute... I just want to tackle him to the ground and smush him with happy kisses! XD Okay... sorry...
person littleolmee
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No complaints from me on updating this story! Loved the chapter. I enjoyed how Naruto went to Sasuke to ask if he and Sakura were involved; it was really a logical conclusion to the clues. Who would think it would be what it really is; Sakura trying to keep Sasuke from Naruto. Naruto laying on Sasuke's bed was very funny, especially with Sasuke's physical reactions to it. Sakura's reactions were well done too, it's interesting that she feels some what in the wrong to keep them a part. I guess recognizing just what they mean to one another. When you left off at Sasuke finding a little pleasure with himself and started back with Naruto going to his house I thought you were going to have Naruto walk in on something . . . hee, hee. But I really like what you did better. Can't wait to see how you have Sasuke break all this too them and how they react. I think Naruto might feel worried about if Sakura seeing it as he has cheated on her. He seems to take their marriage very seriously, which is natural I'd think. Well keep up the great work, thanks for the update and take care.
person dragonlady sakura
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally, the gig is up! I'm glad Naruto is finally catching on to the deceit all around him. I'm biting my nails as we speak. Another great, tension filled chapter.
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter!! I'm glad the next chapter's title is Truth!! Can't wait! :)
person Callie
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Come on Sakura, just play nice & give him to Sasuke.
person bloempot
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story!
I'm glad you're not making sakura some kind of bitch and every one is so in characters.
you're doing a great job! please update soon :)