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person Billie
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I take back what I said before, Sasuke is not a jerk. He actually has a valid reason for doing what he did. Who would've thought that was possible.
I'm liking the story line so much better.
Thanks for the great work.
person Huck
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad this got updated! It pretty much made my day. I liked the flashback and how we got to see what happened the very first time. I was surprised at how reluctant Sasuke was, but it makes sense. It's interesting to see how his feelings have escalated over time. Can't wait for the next chapter!
P.S. Thanks for putting me on the e-mail list.
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah for anatomy! That's all I wanted to say....

XD just kidding! This was a very original story, I must say! And the sex is great too! (Maybe Sasuke and Sakura and Naruto will all make up and make out and have a kinky threesome)

Sasuke: Hey Naruto, I hypnotize you with the Sharingan and have buttsecks with you on a weekly basis to save your cells from chakra mutation. OhbythewayIloveyoutoo.
Naruto: >_< You Teme! *bending over* But I have to live to become the Hokage, so I'll take it like a man.
*they commence buttsecks, Sakura walks in*
Sakura: OMGohshitthatshot! *grabs a strap-on and proceeds to give Sasuke a taste of his own medicine*
Sasuke: Nyoro~!
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok. There is something very, very, very wrong with this story. Horribly wrong.


However, if it manages to end with a Sasuke/Naruto/Sakura threesome, I'll forgive you. ;*





Also, might I add, that an inexperienced Sasuke trying to push sperm into an unconscious Naruto is ridiculously and absurdly funny.
person littleolmee
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
These last two chapters were so interesting to read I love the plot you got going on here. So it seems Sasuke isn't raping his friend, he's actually trying to save his life. I'm sure Sakura would be more understanding if she did know and I doubt Naruto would totally hate everyone . . . well at least after he calmed down. I really love what your doing with this story, please keep with it. You have a really great story going on here. Take care.

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person Allys
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Glomps u* I love how you do research and shit for your stories *Loves on you* ♥. Thank you so much for the quickie update XD. I almost didn't believe it XD, but the date said Nov 18th, so... LOL, I'm so glad I checked. Poor Sasuke, I feel so bad for him, this is one fucked up situation, but cool as all hell anyway *nods*. You always have the most awesomely twisted story lines XD. I love what you did with the whole explanation and the chakra points. So Sasuke's gonna confess? Do you mean like soon?? Cause I don't know if to be excited or worried, it scares me and thrills me at the same time. Kudos to you for being magnificent *chuu* Thank you again love. Still can't believe my good fortune XD.
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!! Loved the flashback of their first time! I sure hope that Sasuke will tell Naruto the truth!! He'll never have a chance with him if Naruto never knows about it.
person Huck
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm a little sad that there won't be frequent updates on this story. It's one of the better current WIPs I've come across. Anyway, lovely chapter and nice twist with the Yin and Yang. I was not expecting that. Keep it up!
person LadyApollonia
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...Day-um... This is exceedingly awesome. Amazing and original. I love it to pieces.
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please post more of this soon... though i do dislike sakura i adore this fic, i just hope divorce is legal in konoha!