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I hope Naruto to end up with Sasuke even thought he's a jerk for taking advantage of him. I seems like Sakura is a good enough person to let that happen, for Naruto's happiness at least.
This is going to be good fight between Sakura & Sasuke. I think Sasuke deserves to get beat up a little bit.
Thanks for the amazing story. I hope you update soon.

wow, quite an original storyline. VERY interesting, can't wait to read more. ^^ Please, be nice and post chapter 3. ^^

I like your story, very original! Please update as soon as possible! :)

I am really happy that I found this piece of fiction.
It is soo... enjoyable.
It's hard to decide who Naruto should be with in the end.

OH LORD YOU MUST UPDATE! This story is so freaking awesome and I am so eager to find out what happens! As usual I love this fic, just as I do everything else you've ever written. Thanks, Jelp, for allowing me the privilege of reading your work. T_T

when r u going to reles the next chapter i want to know what happens so pleas let me know when it will be posted.
thaks and keep up the good work.

I can only second what renzuite is saying... Boiled down, it seems that this reviewer, thatwassarcasm, is mainly complaining that Sakura does not immediately beat up Sasuke.

I think that Sakura's reaction is realistic - being rather shocked and confused, and not knowing what to do, and only after some time coming to her senses and beginning to act - and actually, what she does is rather intelligent, thinking which were the situations when Sasuke took advantage of Naruto and intervening then.

The next step would be to tell Naruto.

I do think that she is in character as well. She is not very heroic, and most of all, not spontaneously heroic as Naruto who charges in without thinking. She always has to overcome her fear. She only punches people when she can be sure that they don't strike back.

oh my goodness ;-; i've been waiting for this!! i gasped out loud when i saw it up x___x

i love it so far. i love that sasuke is the home wrecker and not sakura. XD;

//Naruto's grunts grew louder as Sasuke seemed to drive himself deeper within Naruto, hitting the intense bundle of nerves within the blond shinobi//
It's a prostate. It's a gland. Not a bundle of nerves. That's basic physiology which is better to rely on than a common fandom error. Other than that you've laid the groundwork for a fairly interesting plot.

I hope that you are going to continue this story... :-) You cannot leave it at the point it is at the moment... and as I found it as a recommendation in a sasunaru-community, I hope that it will end with this pairing.