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person animelover
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well, the epilogue threw me for a sec, but i kinda liked it. was a little confused on how sasunaru made up, but hey, i love a happy ending.

thanks for sharing!
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My goodness you did it. You pulled it all together and though I feel a little bad for both Sakura and Tsunade I still feel like you made quite an impressive and satisfying ending. Thank you. Now if you could stop causing me an ulcer with your other story. LOL
person Allys
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL, You just wanted to torture us didn't you XD. Thanks for that little note at the beginning it kept me from wandering if aliens had stolen your brain. For a while there I was like. They brought her back and then she divorced Naruto and married Lee XD. But then Sasuke... o.0... How did he get in there? Cause if she still hadn't gotten over him yet I think I'd seriously have to jump into the afterlife and kick her ass. Especially after all the drama in this story. Wooooo... It was definitely a roller coaster ride. But in the end this turned out to be one really wacky yet thoroughly amazing story XD. I love it. You rock my socks XD. The explanation about Tsunade's youth chakra thingy was Awesome LOLZ. It would serve her right. Don't go messing with shit, just do it all naturally XD. And in the end Naruto and Sasuke are together and all is right with the world XD. I'm also happy that they found the tea. Just in case. I'm sorry, I love both boys but I just love Naruto more ♥. So Congratulations on a job very well done! XD. I love people who finish their stories *Glomps u*. It just makes you even more awesome. I'm off to read the Agreement now XD Ja. Oh and my email is mizrubble22@yahoo.com just for the fun of it.
person a kitsunes light
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWwwwww! This was such a sweet ending!!! I'm sooo happy! I didn't think it would end this well with all the problems they had! And one of the sweetest part is the one of sakura's heaven! I actually though they had brought her back to life and had a family! But the final part was just as sweet! I hope you have more ideas for more fics! I will make sure to read them as long as naruto is in it!
person kauwgom
schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is definitely one of the better naruto fics around
and one of the very few sasunaru fics I actually enjoy
You keep them wonderfully in character and your writing style reads very nice.
keep it up! :)
person Kang
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
D:, There is no possible happy outcome here! Ohhhh, don't get me wrong, this is a great story, and quite riveting, but I'm almost afraid to click on it every time there's an update...
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Naruto won't want revenge or Tsunade to die. I hope what he says is that and also that he loves Sasuke and wants to be with him. Thanks for the new chapter! :)
person animelover
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whoa, that was just .... whoa! can't say much more than that. my opinion? letting tsunade die to bring sakura back is letting tsunade off the hook, and i think naru realizes his true feelings for sasuke.

;-) can't wait to see what you'll do .. thanks for yet another cool fic!
madeline.harris@hotmail.com
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
with this chapter you cemented this story as a definite rereader. i do have a question though. is the fifth really crazy or was she really out for vegence. the way the story ended up being i won't even begin to try and imagine how the story ends just can't wait to see it. i am also wondering if you will be starting another story, i really enjoy yours. :)
person a kitsunes light
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really happy the epilogue is almost ready!!1 Thanks soooo much!
I really liked this chapterbut...... WHAT A CLIFFHANGER!! GEEZE! At least Im content knowing that I will get to know naruto's desicion soon!