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by Jelp

person missmurder111
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww Dont End It Like That! I Thought It Was Hot. And Poor Sakura Even Though See Sucks And Is Stupid And Not Good At Fighting...uh U Get The Point. So Yeah Poor Sakura. It Would Be Kinda Hot If Sasuke Tied Sakura And Make Her Watch Them Have Sex To Show That Naruto Is His. Just A Thought. Update Soon! Along With Ur Other Stories.
person person_a_rt
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! That was sooo cool! That was the fanfic that I was desparate to find! You're the best! I wish there were more fanfics like that! Please write a sequel to this one, I'm really eager to know what will happen next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehe. There I go...reading this story again and reviewing for the thousandth time...I hope your trip is going well and that you get back safely! You better! and if something bad happened to you, MissMayumi will hurt the person who hurt you! Believe It!!! I wonder what exactly happened the nigth that Naruto dragged Sasuke out of his isolation? I imagine Naruto and Sasuke fighting and Sasuke activating his Sharingan and Naruto freezes, caught in the genjutsu. hehe.

well, JA!
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gah! This is like the 20th time I've read this story! I'm like extremely anxious for the next couple of chapters...
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I got the review! Thanks so much Jelp! I love you!
person mindy
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was great. it's too bad sasuke won't grow to love sakura. otherwise, there will eventually be a hawt 3-some :P
person MissMayumi
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Jelp! you have not responded to my email! this makes me sad...
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol personally I think Sakura should've decked him one. Or taken photos. *cough* One or the other.. Drools.. F***ing HOT!!! *fans self*
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love mind control! please please please add another chapter to this..I have an idea, if you'd email me! I think maybe you'd like it!
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was certainly different. I've never really read a story that involved Sasuke raping Naruto before... I think. If I have, I honestly don't remember. It's sad he doesn't know, if he know everything with Sasuke, I wonder what he would think about that?