rate_review Reviews

Whoa! Not what I was expecting. Usually, most authors write the whole sakura bashing, kind of screwing in front of her, then calling her stupid or something. This is a new twist. I really like it. I am interested where you are going to take this story. Will Sasuke be evil and try to get naruto's body, heart and soul? Was there a three-some foreshadowing underlying there somewhere? Sakura will always be a yaoi fangirl at heart LOL!

Great story even for a one-shot. Would love to see it expanded at least a little more.

I would realy like this story to become a multichapter. A threesome between the three woul be very hot.^^
The characters are very IC. I like this storyline. Can't wait for more.

go to hell sakura.. you deserve to die.. the earth doesn't need another slut like you.. grrr..

dear author.. would you please place naruto's heart in sasuke's hands..? and leave sakura in total agony..? thank you.. you're the best..^^

Ho'shit, that was great. Well done, keep writing. Your writing intoxicates me <3

I definitely think you should write more! Sad, though. Although, I admit to being angry at Sasuke and Naruto initially. I can't stand unfaithfulness. But then Sasuke seemed so...pathetic, maybe even slightly ridiculously pathetic. An interesting dynamic you have set up here. Unfortunately, and I am really not into Het, but I cannot see myself being satisfied with Naruto leaving Sakura (scandalized that I even wrote that! I hate nartuo/sakura fics!) Still, I actually despise Sasuke in this fic. Manipulative rape?! What an asshole! In this fic, I would actually like to see Sasuke suffer unto death pathetic and alone. Sakura sure doesn't deserve to suffer (I can't believe I wrote that either! The little yaoi person inside of me is screaming in rage.) and Naruto always has to suffer unrequited love in these fanfics. I would love to see the tables turn on Sasuke. I haven't read very many fics that have taken this angle. Good work!

how sad. i definitely wasn't expecting a story like this when i opened the link. i liked it a lot though. hmm..made me think a bit. i was actually contented with this as a oneshot. i think it has impact already. besides, a multichapter fic may just be too heartwrenching for me. anyway, really nice job.

*_* dude that was great!!!!!!!! I not really a big Sakura fan, but the way she came off here was really good. I mean I felt for her you know? Heheh dude Sasuke is a sneaky bastard! It was a great one-shot if you make it a multi what would be ny new addiction since I'm hooked on Restless! That was tripy...Naruto all fucked up, it would explain why he didn't say Sasuke's name when his cummed. crazy!

This is by far the best Naruto fic I have read in a long time.
I usually hate one-shots, but I feel this was wrapped up pretty nicely, even if it doesn't feel so final and definite; I don't know if I want more or not.
Either way, this is still a satisfyig piece.

wow- intense... but how could she not tell naruto? I mean his 'best friend' is hypnotizing (?) him withi his kekkei genkai into doing that... *sigh* I'm curoious though because you said sasunaru so I'm wondering if Sakura will actually keep her husband in the end. Italso seems that she wasn't overly upset at what Sasuke did (I mean hey it was amazing and hot i know heh) but yeah... she doesn't seem that upset about it... maybe its because its sasuke *thinks* anyway :D cool chp and can't wait to see where this is gonna go, you really have me intrigued here :D

Hina xXxx