rate_review Reviews

Excellent story. The plot is great. I love the line, " his body may be yours but his heart is mine." Look forward to reading your future works. Until next time, take care and god bless.

This was so great!!! But I'd love it if it was multi-chaptered and an eventual SasuNaru with Sasuke winning Naruto's heart too. ;)

i really liked this but i was sad that sasuke seemed so pathetic. if you continue i would love for naruto to find out what has been going on and that sakura knew about it. maybe find out what sasuke can do when he is awake. but don't stop writing restless i wann aknow how it ends.

how...disturbing. 0.o no offense.

dat was goooood~ <3
i actually like sakura~
but not with sasu or naru~ cuz they make mad hott sex lol
so i'm glad you didn't make her a bitch like other stories! <3
so proud of u! lol

dat was goooood~
i actually like sakura~
but not with sasu or naru~ cuz they make mad hott sex lol
so i'm glad you didn't make her a bitch like other stories!
so proud of u! lol

It is up to you what to do with this but I've got to say it was a fantastic chapter. At first I thought you might have had it in the wrong section; with Naruto and Sakura being married, but as I read and the story unfolded I became enthalled with it. I like that you had elements from the manga and anime; like Naruto being lousey at genjutsu and even the possible 'love triangle' in team 7. Also the characters came across as they do in the series, reacting to the situtions you put them in away that seemed believable. It was bittersweet. Sakura not wanting to hurt either of them and just so long as she knew she still had a place she would keep quiet. Sasuke really in love with Naurto but not being able to get what he really wants finding a way to get enough to give him some happiness allowing him to feel he could continue living. And poor Naruto not knowing how important he really was to both his old teammates. The boy who had no one now needed by many. . . anyway thanks for sharing your story with everyone, it really was a great read. I'll keep my eyes out for it, just in case you do decide to add to it; it would be great to see more on this story but I leave that up to you. Take care and thanks again.