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Please don't kill off Sasuke too!!! Naruto needs him!! I am glad that Naruto is okay and knows the truth now, though. Thanks for the new chapter! :)

Brilliant!

wow! now THAT was surprising!Tsunade the killer? Naruto with s shorter leg? And sasuke falling of a window because tsunade threw him? OMG! This is the most violent tsunade I've ever seen!!!!! Ican't believe it!
Please write soon again this is waaaaaaaay too much of a cliffhanger!!!! I wanna know what happens soon!!! PLEASE!!!

yay! babies! i'm so excited :] i wonder which eye trait is more dominant? the sharingan or byaakugan?

Oh no! Evil cliffy from hell! Please please please don't let naruto die!! especially not at the hand of sasuke! I hate shizune! She is so stupid! But I stll love your story!!! more so if naruto survive!!!

I don't remember if I reviewed, but more onegai!! This is so yummy and juicy and cryfully angsty, I love it.

OOOOOOH i should have known that you wouldn't resort to sasuke-kill! there was suuch an amount of joy that went through my system when i read this chapter~! this is a real writer. gawd. lol. <3333 can't wait for the next one!

oh haha, i was so overwhelmingly happy over the non-sasuke-kill that i totally overlooked the last part of the story. i think naruto's actions can be more desperate and sasuke more confused...~ ahhh <3 that's all i have~ hehe

oh yeah! a new take on the title "Mine!"

"You're the matter with me! This is all your fault," Naruto said, sobbing harder as his body began to shake with sobs. "No...it's mine. I should never have led you on..."


you're the best jelp~! this story really does get better and better! feel better soon!

...Whoa. Talk about a mind fuck. XD I'M SO RELIEVED IT WASN'T SASUKE! I wasn't sure just how crazy you were planning to make him. Which, as it turns out, was not that crazy. Most people go for that so it's kinda the expected but that doesn't mean it's always best. Definitely didn't expect it to be Tsunade though. Like...dang. WTF. THAT BITCH CRAZY (in this story! =D) Loved the chapter. My eyes started to burn as soon as you mentioned the pepper powder and I thought, man, Sasuke's so much more tolerant than me cuz I would've BEAT Naruto's ass in that situation. Like man...=D

you just seriously confused the fuck out of me :angry pout: i don't like how this is turning out, i mean i see what you are trying to do, but it just leaves a bad taste in my mouth, and a really huge headache. you're a really good writer, just remember to keep it simple