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Oh dear!!!! I hope he's not fatally injured.

WHOA!!!
Holy crap... was not expecting that, i figured Sasuke kidnapped her or something... but not kill her O_O
DUDE, huge plot twist.

I love it.
<3 haha I love angst.
So anyways, leaving a review behind, cause I'm awesome like that and I think I said I would in my last review.
So until next time,
ja ne!
fujinakaheero

LOL, I'm not going to hurt you but Holy Cripes woman!! Sasuke has freaking lost it. And by it I mean everything, not just his sanity, freaking Everything. Stupid STUPID boy!! Oh my god... I was really hoping against hope that he hadn't actually killed Sakura but was like holding her hostage somewhere but... Oh Man. There's no coming back from this. How are either of them going to live now? If Naruto kills Sasuke then how will he get his yin chakra?? (Sakura didn't exactly have time to share her discovery). And if he doesn't kill Sasuke... :(, yeah I can't possibly see how that would work. I'm really intrigued to see how this is going to end, I already know it can't possibly "well". So I've resigned myself. now just to see what your amazing brain comes up with!! I'm sorry I took so long to get to this. I've been way to busy and stories have been getting lost in my tabs when I try to save them for later *sighs*. Now off to finally begin The Agreement, cause damn you're WAY ahead of me!!

...damn you! you really suck! eeevil!!!! but i love you for it anyways. seriously, evil. the only thing i have issues with is Sakura's body. Sasuke is a master of fire jutsu.....and even if he goes nuts over Naruto, he's stil a ninja! He could kill someone, leave no evidence that it was him and there would never be a body to be found, then he and Naruto would go at it like rabbits for the rest of eternity and live happily ever after >_<
i love happy endings at the end of soul shattering angst...justifies the torture you put us through. oh well, however it plays out is up to you, and even if you twist the knife and make that blank angsty void in me hurt a bit more, i'll be happy. i also admire greatly the ability to rationalize Naruto needing sex from Sasuke to survive. fandoms with chakra, demons, or magic are the most fun ever.

Anyone else hear that? That's the sound of the shit hitting the fan. DX Oh LAWD! This is so dramatic...;o;

*sits, staring at computer screen, crying* I'm horrified!! Why couldn't this have ended in threesome??!? Uaaaah, Kang does not approve. How depressing! ;_;

NO WAY IN HELL HE DIDN'T??? Sakura is really dead? Damn, Sasuke... he's in way too deep of waters!! Naruto's probably either going to kill Sasuke and then himself or just kill Sasuke and live a life as a numb and no longer emotional being (or maybe there's a more hopeful and better ending?). Wow, I'm going to have to wait for the next chapter to see how this all falls into place. Obviously Sasuke had left in the morning because he knew Naruto was going to find Sakura was murdered none other than by him (plus Sasuke wanted to get a head start). Those two, no matter what peril situation whether if that's against each other or for each other, are constantly chasing one another to the ends of the Earth. Well... now my heads going to be dishing out all the possible scenarios for next chapter. Hope to read it soon whenever you have it completed, Jelp! Have lots of fun in the sun in the meantime!

~SasuNaru723~

WOW. OK, I have to admit that the plot seemed far fetched, but I love how insane and desperate you've made Sasuke. Very believable. The only suggestion I have for your writing style is to use more action and dialog and less narrative. It's too much telling and not enough showing. Great job though. Can't wait for more!

Aww hell...I hope Sasuke somehow gets away with it.

*Reaches for her scythe, glaring at Jelp* Run, little kitten, run.