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for The Target

by poppyseed

person Dragon7
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
person mydarkerside
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ack!! You have to update this!! What role will Gaara play? How will Naruto and Sasuke get along? What situation will Naruto arrange? How long are you going to have them in school? What other characters are you going to introduce? I really want to see an update! I like it lots! And I thought it was put together very well. The sypnosis is believable, I think. I'm very curious as to who is after Sasuke, also.
person mokie
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! I loved the chapter. I can't wait until you update again. ^_^. Yay, it's actually Naruto that is working for Orochimaru and trying to get Sasuke instead of the other way around. Hmm, I wonder why Sasuke pays Gaara to be his boyfriend. Maybe to protect him from his evil brother Itachi! -gasp- Lol. Well, I can't wait for the next chapter to come out! Keep writing, you're doing a good job.
person Allys
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very very interesting, strange and original. I want to see where this goes. Update soon, ne.