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for Tentacled Hinata

by absolom

schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I love this fic, say which girl is next, also are you going to have naruto pop up in the fic, because I would like to see what would happen to him if this slime grabs him.
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sakura and the girls got knocked up? Yikes! It's Demon Beast Invasion all over again! Great chapter, though. Can't wait to see what happens next!
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sweet! Very few people write good tentacle fics. Good work!
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The men have disappeared? That can't be good. But with that out of the way, great chapter! Ino's a fave of mine, as my penname implies, and seeing her get tentacled was just awesome. Keep up the good work.
schedule April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what if it's naruto using a transformatoin Jutsu to get reveage on the villages
schedule April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What is the ooze and why did it go after Hinata. What happened to all of the guys did the ooze capturer them and put them in a prison or what. I don't understand the story but it seems you have a crazy view on the ooze like from TMNT the secret of the OOZE
person nimistar
schedule April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great job, i loved it. if only it were longer or had more chapters.
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very hot. Obviously, as a pervert, I would have to beg you for another chapter. And then, to further my descent, I would request possible a bit more anal sex?