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July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I didn't read your story - I just skimmed it. My honest advice to you is to reformat it. The short, one-or-two sentence paragraphs, unbroken into separate sections, was hard on the eyes and seemed to really take away from any flow in the story. I think restructuring it a little could do you some good.
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the pairing!
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woo! sex scenes are my favorite!! this story was lovely. One thing though, did Neji regret ever doing that with him? Or he didn't? I got kind of confused at the end. heh, but lovely story.