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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not much to say about this. It's not very original and doesn't have that much passion. It just sounds like a cut-n-paste of so many other writings out there. Sorry if I'm being a little insensitive, but that's how I critique.
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May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Momo's like me, I have a hard time writing the word 'nipple' without going red and choking up. It was wonderful, she should be ashamed of it in the slightest.
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehe, that was pretty good. Sasu/Saku ftw.
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
how can anyone that writes that be shy? well very good job on this.... is there a way to see more of her stories
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April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw, you shouldn't be shy Momo. Great fanfic! :)
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April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GREAT! Your such a good friend for posting this for Momo, but she shouldn't feel shy about something fabulous she wrote. The writing was great as well as the story. BUT THAT'S IT????!!!! There should have been a little more...(.^_~.)
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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! That was really good the only thing is i dont really see why sasuke like attacked her and fucked her it was kinda random but it was really good!!
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April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, what a 'fun' way to relax, don't you think Sasuke? :D I enjoyed your story very much! Hot and juicy...and Sasuke isn't too OOC, hehehe.
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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
always great krickets... always great...
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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome and so origianl, tell Momo that this was great!! LOL!!