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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is such a sad and sweet story. I really like what you are doing with this. Great work.
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch.4 was very sweet, it was nice to see that Naruto got to have a normal birthday and also that there was at least a couple of kids that showed up.
what can I even say about ch.5, it's just so sad to think of people treating a little child like that, although I did take some pleasure in Kakashi sending the dogs after the drunks!
what can I even say about ch.5, it's just so sad to think of people treating a little child like that, although I did take some pleasure in Kakashi sending the dogs after the drunks!
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think that was a very good presentation of what would go through most four year olds' minds in that situation. Keep it up!!!
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so loving this story. It is so sweet. It has its sad moments but I still like the flow. It's so realistic as to what things were probably really like for a very young Naruto. All that hatred for an innocent. Iruka has such a big heart. Can't wait for the next update.
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay, I'm so glad that you updated! I love the latest chapter, especially how Lee and Neji were at the party (and the happy little KakaIru scene was an added bonus as well).
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh please update soon
I love this story.
will sasuke be making an entrance?
I love this story.
will sasuke be making an entrance?
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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful new chapter, little Naruto is too cute and Neji and Lee coming over to celebrate his birthday was such a nice little touch :) I can just imagine all those little chibi's playing together.
And happy mother's day to you hon, I got the cutest little tile from my little girl with her handprint on it :)
And happy mother's day to you hon, I got the cutest little tile from my little girl with her handprint on it :)
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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That last chapter was really really good. It was cute, funny, at times sad and, at the end went from !HOT! to very sweet. Great job!
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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter! I'm so glad Naruto had a great birthday and the lime scene between Iruka and Kakashi was wonderful too! Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is just to sweeeeet!
Please update soon, I want to 'hear' the rest of their story.
Please update soon, I want to 'hear' the rest of their story.