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April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad someone was there to help Iruka and Naruto since Kakashi wasn't there. And it was sweet that Kakashi and Naruto are getting closer. Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is evolving nicely. Fleshing the story out with detail will give it a more "completed" feel, and draw your readers further into this entrancing world you are creating.
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April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahhwwwwwwwww so cute!!!! *glares at evil men* hopefully they get what they deserved!
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April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! Your story so far is incredibly cute! I love how you write. You don't over explain things to death but, you still manage to give the story personality. I like that Kakashi wasn't so sure on how to court Iruka and that Iruka was the first to make a move. Keep up the good work! I'll be waiting for the next chapter!!
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April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I have to review. this is one sweet and yummy story. I just love little Naruto. He is so cute! *squeals*
I can't wait to see Kakashi and Iruka hook up. They are absolutely my favorite pairing in Naruto aside from
SasuXNaru. Anyway, your story just makes my day, especially after a very long and hard day at work.
Keep it up.
I can't wait to see Kakashi and Iruka hook up. They are absolutely my favorite pairing in Naruto aside from
SasuXNaru. Anyway, your story just makes my day, especially after a very long and hard day at work.
Keep it up.
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April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow i love it. cool plot. so sweet.
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April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is this a one shot?
I'd REALLY like to read more.
I always wondered who took care of Naruto as an infant.
I like this a LOT!
I'd REALLY like to read more.
I always wondered who took care of Naruto as an infant.
I like this a LOT!
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April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
soo way cute! pleas update this one!
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April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm proud of Iruka and Kakashi. They are the only ones beside the Hokage that is concern about Naruto. Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww this was so cute!! Love it so far! :)