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schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
me: SEXUAL FAVORS!! score!! come on, haku's gotta be dirty SOMEhow!!!

my sis: haku=seme!

me: update soon!! pretty please!~
person Twiggies
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahah. Oh god.
..Could Neji be the next hottie??? PLEASE? :3

I don't know how you can do it, but write awesome fics! Ilove this, and you and your other stories.

UPDATE SOON !! LOVE YAA !
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I like this story its really fun. And my vote for the next to arrive be Kiba-kun with Akamaru. But a big no-no on beasty. Just thought it'd be cute for the dog to be there.
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hiyo! I have a treat for you all, more like a peace offering just in case there isn't an update by tomorrow. It's my favorite scene in Chapter 1 as I imagined it took place. It's Sasuke and Itachi as the butlers. The first picture is the censored one, just in case you're squeamish about men whose clothes don't fit them properly *cough*. The second one is UNCENSORED so you've been warned.

I wasn't going to make him look so lewd, honest, It started out very innocent enough, Itachi's briefs fit and he looked as modest as any man could wearing a thong bikini could but then, I can't explain it, this thing came over me and I had to make them a tad bit smaller, I'm so baaad. Anyway, Itachi doesn't seem to mind (even though it looks REALLY uncomfortable)

CENSORED link: http://s156.photobucket.com/albums/t29/_ClaireBear_ficpics/?action=view¤t=WttIoBM-Censored.jpg

UNCENSORED / postcard link: http://s156.photobucket.com/albums/t29/_ClaireBear_ficpics/?action=view¤t=WttIoBM-UnCensored.jpg

And in answer to Sasuke's question...I'll have a sip of that tall, cool glass of water standing next to him >.<
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT! MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!! Can Gaara be the next guy? he is soooo cute! Make him where a cute Panda Outfit! PLEASE!!!!
person Dragon7
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*drools* omg yes update soon! I want more of those hot boys. *cackles maddly* je ne!
person Anon
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gaara/Lee with Gaara on top please! This pairing is so rare.
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
me: neji's gotta show up, hands down! and gaara, pretty please... i want iruka to give 'em up! yeah! because we all know this is just the first part of kakashi's mastermind plan to seduce iruka, yeah? ooh... and haku and sasuke should do something steamy...

my sis: kabuto needs to come. kakashi should have a change of heart and give itachi his pants, but itachi STILL wants naruto's.

me: uh... that's all i can think of for now! though i wonder who the bad guys are... well, to the boys they're bad guys. to us fangirls, they're, like, god.~
person Damius
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loving this so far. Itachi trying to steal naruto shorts was a beautiful image in my mind. i think a rare combination like ItachiNarutoKiba would be hot, but Neji and Shikamaru is hot too. Cant wait for more.