AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Starlight

by Greenstages

person LadyWolf
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read more!!!!! Please post soon@!!!
person UchihaXBloodXBoils
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is... one of the best SasuNaru.. I have ever read!!!
OMG!!!!
I was reading it and I thought like 'wouldnt it be good if, in the next bit...' and then whatever I thought seemed to happen!! Like when Sasuke hops on Naruto's lap... or Sasuke jumps Naruto when they are finished playing that game... or when Sasuke completely ignores Sakura.. Hellz Yeah!!! Write more!!
person hisoka
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what a couple theyll make, wonder how sakura will react when she finds out.
updates
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it was so hot keep writing damn it
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved this part II! I can't wait to see where this'll go.....you are continuing this riiiight?? Great job.
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was such a great story!!! You've written it like it could be a multi-fic story! It would be nice if you could continue this because you wrote it so well and it was so hot!!! :)
person Ilene
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad u made another chap for this story! LOL I loved Sasuke's IM name, perfect! More please!
person brit
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh god I love Naruto on top, but not exactly the seme. ;] I just find it all the more sexier since I've seen so many ukes on the bottom. heh Great job on the story and don't forget to update soon neh? ^_^ IF not make more stories! I'll be there to read! ^_^
person llyoung
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hope you decide to continue this story past a two shot. Thanks for writing.
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehe I really liked this story! I use Marth when I play Super Smash brothers Melee. My buddy uses Pikachu...I personally hate the little citter so I love it when I stomp him in the ground. (he whines when he loses too :P) My favorite Ramen flavor is Roast Chicken...(speaking of ramen...I'm Hungry...) Loved the story. (wow I've never written this much in a review before...) Anyway! Can't wait to see more Sasu/Naru goodness (even if you are done with this story) Je!