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by Greenstages

schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hope the other encounter is a follow-up. This is intriuging.
person macy
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so hot and so cute. I love both of their reactions in this. Sasuke licking Naruto's used fork was a bit creepy yet sexy still. I would be so happy if there were more to this story. Thanks.
person chineseartist
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
maybe they should run into each other on campus? or at another party? a game convention or the game shop, looking for a newly release game? and they go back to...sasuke's? house and end up getting a little more involved? (sorry for the over-usage of question marks) but it was cute and hot, so i'd like more, please!
person chineseartist
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME! need i say more?........didn't think so.
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Four words:

Second encounter...

And,

Hurry dammit!

Seriously...do you even have to ask if you should do a second chapter? I loved it! Please, hurry and update.

Ki`Tara
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My darling, the long wait was TOTALLY worth it!!!!!!!!!

That lemon was hawt! It captured the natural realistic awkwardness and passion that can be the first time. I loved it. You MUST add another chapter. That was too delish!
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved this one-shot!! It was hot!!!! :)
person Damp
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so cute! I thought I'd die from the cutness of it all, when Sasuke licked the fork Naruto was using!! EEP~ an indirect kiss! I would really like it if you wrote a continuing chapter! This just screams unfinished~ and a fic as pretty and lovely such as this deserves to be finished!
person fluffy_cloud
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please do! make them encounter once more! maybe a quick sex in the closet or something ;P theeheehee. i'm such a pervert. especially if it's involving with sasuke & naruto.
person KariNeko
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, PLEASE continue this. It was just too hot to stop and I love how Sasuke and Naruto interact especially being so different! <3