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for And The Pain Ends

by darkangelthefallen

person Anon
schedule March 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I WANT MORE CHAPTERS DAM IT...
hurry,hurry,hurry..more chappies please,
i wanna know what happens next...So get off
yer humbs and do more chappies....TOTALLY,
TOTALLY,TOATLLY LOVE THIS FIC BY THE WAY...
and if anyone says differently,they need ta be
shot...XD..so don't give up on yer writing O.K.
keep up the good work.
person Shadi88
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was lovely and expect much more in the future. I've rated five for each chapter and I have read all of them.
They are well made and beautifully appreciated. I would like to write more to show how much I enjoy your story but I'm so tired.
Sorry wish it was longer, I owe you some many more reviews. Good super duper fantastic story. ~ ^_^ ~
Good luck, best wishes, and blessed be.
Butterfly Beauty
person zeroharm
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow.. sorry you haven't been getting much review love, but I read this entire story over the last few days, and I have to say I really like it. Taku is an interesting OC and any waff fic is good in my books :-) I am surprised I have never noticed this before on the updates list, but am looking forward to a new chapter!
person Haskins
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to tell you that you are a great author and I really love this story. I hope that you will continue with it because I desperately want to find out what happens to Taku and Chouji. :) Thanks for writing!.
person Anon
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very nice new chapter though you did add it twice
person Wolfboy1988
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great fic so far! keep it up! I wanna see how long it will run and how it will end! dont leave us hanging!
person Kilrath
schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I still very much enjoy this story and look forward to seeing more. Also i like how you had chouji react to taku leaving him for the while. Keep this up
person Kilrath
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very well written. You engage the reader and keep them interested. I very much look forward to seeing more from you.
person jinx
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well,the first chapter is very good and also misterious.Btw I think there are some grammar mistakes but they aren't that important.I'm gonna read more to find out what will happen to Taku *wink and smile*
person jinx
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's a great story.I'm happy for Taku.She's so sweet.Keep up the good work.