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Waaaaah! I'm done!!!! Okay. I was reviewing more often at the start but i just got way to pulled into the story. So many pairings. So complex, so hot. I loved the complex network of characters. Seeing the shifts in personality was earthshaking to read. Okay, favorite parts...Shika and Gaara are so hot it should be illegal. I would love to read a one shot of the collaring. The intricate thread with Neji, Sai, Haihashi and Kimmimaru was amazing. I was wondering at the start if there was a line of abuse stretching back there. You wrote it out beautifully. I don't know why but i think that the HaiKim pairing was my fav. No wait...who am I kidding? I love KakaIru/Irukaka. Soooo amazing. God i almost cried when they figured everything out. I don't know what it is about those two that gets me every time. The intensity of their relationship is always so high. Even in light fluffy stories they seem so hopelessly in love, even if they can't admit it.
Okay,I usually am not a Kisame fan but you wrote him sooooo well, how could i not think that he was smokin'? Seeing Itachi break was a thing of beauty. He's always written as the dom. Always. Granted i don't read much KisIta but every other pairing he's the seme. Really really amazing. And not just how smolderingly sexy it was but so fluid and well planned. Your writing is a treat to the eyes, even when i've been staring at a computer screen for every free second for like...four days.
God...there was something else...Oh yeah. IbiRaiGen. Please write more. You could pump out oneshots for this story forever. Seriously. Wow. The three of them blew my mind. So indepth into the inner thoughts and turmoil in their minds. Amazing. God I wish i'd taken my time with this story now. I can't tell you how depressing it is to be done. HOWEVER...now i will be able to concentrate on my own writing for a while. I'm sure you'll be getting more reviews from me very soon. I know this deserves more than what a wrote but i have to be up in the morning and i pushed myself to finish the last chapter. Too good for my tawdry words to do it justice. Bravo!!! BRAVO!
Cheers
Meg

Okay i'm usually a sasunaru fan but that was amazing. really really good. I'm a little worried about starting this now because i have writing i should be doing but i'm hooked now!
Great so far. Damn Iruka makes a super sexy dom. Wow.
Cheers
Meg

okay, shikagaara...soooooo hot!!! What a great pairing. I love to see gaara go through his change from psycho to sweetheart. I really hope you wrote Shika as his partner. Okay i gotta keep going. Very nice thus far!
Cheers
Meg

Hestia,

Are you going to still update this fiction. You told us that the original ending was just a post, not the ending that you planned since you continued the story. The ending you have now really has very little to do with the direction your story has taken a turn for. I hope you will continue this fiction. I love reading about gaara/shikamaru, hiashi/kimmaru was just beginning, and shino/kankuro. Please update soon. Please

tata

Dear God...i just love this story.....it took me 3-4 days to read all those chapters, but damn i'm happy that i was introduced to it....the scenes, the characters, their depth, how love is changing their lives I loved all of it...and from what i'm guessing this isn't the end right...???

Wow, there's a lot of chapters to this. Since D/s isn't my thing really, I might not have kept reading except for the fact that there was a good deal of romance going on as well as the spankings, bondage, what have you. My favs were definitely Gaara/Shkamaru and Iruka/Kakashi pairings. Especially when Iruka lost it because he thought that Kakashi was just a slut who was using him rather than his loving slave. And when Shika went food shopping and Gaara wigged out - very cute.

I've thought of some more stuff to review about now. If you consider adding Pein to the story but would rather keep het out of it, Madara would be a good choice for him I think. Also, about the Sasuke and Itachi unable to cum for a week thing, I don't think anyone would hold it against you if you did a few time skips, or developed other characters during that time, or introduced new characters *ahem* while their cum-less week is counting down. Anyhoo, I hope to see more of this story soon, KisaIta in particular, and I'm definitely crossing my fingers for Pein. :D

I was shocked to see that Pein hadn't made an appearance in this story yet! You know what would be sexy as hell? Mistress Konan and slave Pein. I know this is a yaoi fanfiction, but god, that pairing came to me in a dream, and if you found a way to somehow put it in the story, it would complete my LIFE! No pressure though!

And I know that this is mainly a NaruSasu fic, but I must admit, I enjoy the KisaIta scenes the most. NO ONE ever does uke Itachi. And I can't even possibly begin to describe how completely refreshing it was to see that in this story, Itachi was the one who had been victimized by Sasuke, not the other way around. I hope you're planning on having Sasuke regain some of his memories, because it would be really interesting to see how he reacts.

AAaaaaAAahhhHHhh!!! I'm going so crazy waiting for an update! Are you really going to write any more of D/s Naruto or are you majorly blocked? Because you don't have to give a blow-by-blow about what every couple does--like your block about Naru/Sasu since Sasuke obviously has a piercing so no sex for a week. Like you said, if Itachi isn't allowed to cum during the week either, you can put these two pairings by the wayside and concentrate on others. You can just bring them back on the last day of their restrained weeks, and give a decent recap of the week but still give us a bit of their experience by going over the last day and what kind of mental/emotional/physical state their in. Itachi would be completely desperate and comatose, I would imagine, and I'd love to see how Kisame would bring him back to life, so to speak. Or you know, you could just go over Naru/Sasu with obviously no full orgasmic sex--this could be a chance to go over their feelings for each other without consummating sex, and what that means for them, and do they really feel something for each other, etc.

Wow, it's clear by the rapid increase in hits for this story that other people are getting just as crazy and anticipatory as I am. I check to see for updates like 10 times a day, and I can't stop myself. OooooOOooh, I really hope that we get more Gaara/Shika and Kankurou/Shino--the former because you've made me love this pairing, and the latter because you stopped at a really interesting spot in their relationship. How will their relationship progress? How will Shino adjust to being a sub on a more permanent basis? And what about Shikamaru's parents?! Will they like Gaara??? Ahhh!!!