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LOL, I see you've started a revolution XD. Have you noticed the sheer amount of D/s stories that have cropped up all of a sudden :D. I think it's adorable, quite the finest form of flattery.
Thank you for sorting out the safeword issue. I never really thought of it like that - I always thought of beloved as a really old fashioned word that wouldn't come up. But it fits perfectly into the phrase My beloved Master. Also yes the psychological impressions of the issue are scary, Hmm, something to think on.
Poor, poor Sasuke, poor unsuspecting cynical Sasuke. I thought that too at first, about that bright instant love, and I suppose it is true. But the key, one very wise someone somewhere once said, to staying in love, is that both parties can't fall out of love at the same time. Maybe by the time Naruto's ready to fall out, Sasuke will have fallen in. There's nothing more satisfying than being with someone who loves you. It can be one of those vicious cycles really :).
I liked this chapter - A little insight into everyone's background and a few unresolved issue to make me anxious - What's Itachi talking to Neji about? What the Hell is up with Sai? Will Naruto ever get to see Sasuke's apartment? Is there someone out there for Shino? Will Gaara eventually prove too much for Shika? And will the shark ever catch the whale?
I Really like the fact that as in real relationships, even the ones that seem to be going so very well, there are still unresolved issues. I'm also very happy with your characterisations, you've kept them rather true to their natures all of them. That's quite an achievement.
You've also introduced a touch of Yuri in here. I have to admit, I have little to no experience in that category, and it never really held any interest for me before - But if you write it baby I'll read it :)
The workings of the club never cease to amaze me, and I Adore Sasuke's piercings. I also really love Sasori as a concierge - His gossip policy is so french, LOL, perfect.
I'll be breathlessly awaiting your next installment XD.
Luffles, Allys.

Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Would it be possible if you could write more of itachi? Pretty Please.

HOLY SH!T

Your description of Gaara and Shika is the best thing out of this gorgeous story. Rock on ...

Your story just continues to get better and better. I loved the part with Naruto and Sasuke in Naruto's shop and Gaara and Shika together is great. Thanks so much for writing this story.

You've written an absolutely wonderful story thus far. I really enjoyed your colorful depiction of the white ocean w/ blood red surf. I'm sure it'll stick w/ me for a long time to come. I look forward to many more chapters from you, including Naruto's submission and the Sasuke's piercings. Keep up the great work.

All I can say is wow. [chuckles and smiles] When I was first started reading this I wasn't sure how I'd react to IruKaka and NaruSasu; especially since I am a firm supporter of Naruto uke. However, the way you've approached it, with a unique balance between Sasuke and Naruto really made me reconsider Naruto-seme. It's truely perfect in my opinion and a nice change from the norm. I'll be honest in saying I'm not really a fan of KakaIru/IruKaka, I think simply because I am a 100% KakaNaru fan [sighs] It was too bad (at least in my view) that Kakashi isn't as fond of Naruto as I would have liked - but as they say, can't please everyone. Also, considering the theme of the story and him being subby to Iruka, I suppose it wouldn't make sense otherwise.
It's truely an interestign story, one of which I hope will be updated soon. After all, this fic is diffrent, creative, steamy and so much more. Thank you for creating the work.

Yummy. I read some of the reviews and I have to agree: where is Sai and Ibiki? They are soooo good together.

Please, please more!

amazing chapter
as usual
keep up the AMAZING work!

ja ne!

mmm so hot. Naruto's in love. I can only hope Sasuke feels the same?