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omg!!! this story is sooooo cool :D i love it. and it keeps getting better with every chapter :D

Sasuke is so confused and Naruto needs to get his act together - They're such a mess XD. But isn't love meant to be messy? That knife of Naruto's still kills me, I think it's one of those matters of trust - talk about instant focus, fear does that. Fear and pain make you very aware of yourself, mentally and physically. Are you going to change Sasuke's safe words? I like beloved, but will Naruto let him keep Itachi? Those boys need to sit down and think about what they're doing, get their feelings sorted out - I don't want anyone to get really hurt. Hmmnn, retraining - do you have a plan for that? Who'll be in charge of them? Iruka? Itachi? Ibiki? They're so sweet, this chapter made them both seem incredibly young, like new, and it was adorable - especially when Sasuke said "Master isn't pleased and he won't fuck me now" LOL, and then when Naruto got all "Where do you hurt, baby, tell me?" God I wanted to huggle them to death. The mini "your idiot" conversation was also really sweet and Sasuke saying "exactly" was a perfect end note. I was a little surprised though that Sasuke accepted the fact that Naruto loves him so quickly. Naruto certainly has the capacity, but Sasuke can be such a cynic. They're moving really fast- it's one of those relationships you look at from the outside and you're all - "you're going to Crash and Burn - Slow down" Iruka's already all mad at them, and everyone else seems to be in shock. LOL, Naruto's been there what 2 days and already he's set the whole scene on its ear XD. I mean between Kakashi misbehaving, Sasori finding out about Itachi and Kisame and Shika leaving Neji to Dom for Gaara, O.O LOL!!

That was so hot and sweet! I love your Naruto, he's just perfect ^^;

Can't wait for Sasuke's collar ceremony ;)

more oh god please more

Wow... Shikamaru and Gaara. So hot.

Well, that was a surprising twist. Now I'm left wondering what will happen to Neji, will he continue to dom or will he submit? And, I desperately want Gaara and Shikamaru to get together...

I am loving your fic. You are doing one hell of an amazing job. I've always been interested in D/s stories, never actually been to a club though. And I wasn't even upset about your references to urine and fecal matter {I am squeemish about this}.

And I adore you for having Judo as a topic in this fic. I, myself, am a judoka {Judo player}. The perfect site that my Sensei even recommends is www.judoinfo.com

Keep up the good work. :)

Ahh, poor Kakashi. I don't have a penis yet I was feeling his pain. Ouch!
I really enjoy this story. You are a good writer and despite frequent updates, the quality of your writing is not suffering at all. It is such a stress reliever to read your story after a day of my super bitchy boss (oh wait that would be myself).
Thanks for the excellent fic. Can't wait to see where this goes.
PS: While I am all for Naruto whipping Neji and showing Neji who Neji really is under all his insecurities, I do not think Sasuke would forgive Naruto having sex with Neji. Sasuke is more than a little possessive and jealous - right!

As for the reviewer that was suggesting lube with pepper - all I can say is YIKES! That has to be on par with using soap as lube (as I see in a lot of fics). You'd have to have either really insensitive inner parts or a liking for stinging and burning in your private areas!

hmmm..... not as great as the previous chapter. also a bit unexpected i though gaara was going to end up with neji for a moment there. i guess i'm just not a big fan of shikamaru. shino or kiba would have been better.
i kinda felt bad for neji a second there. he sound so fucked up in this fic. i wonder why.
any chance were going to read an act of exhibitionism between naruto & sasuke?

Okay... That was... strangely interesting - WTF just happened!!?? LOL XD. Okay - review from the beginning XD. Thank God for lazy geniuses. It's a theory of mine that the reason he's so lazy is cause his damn brain takes up all his energy...

My brother is rushing me to go watch the new Shippuden, I'm going to make him wait, LOL. Anyway a quetsion the situation with Neji and his uncle - Abusive? Interesting. And the way he was so summarily dropped, only someone very secure in their reasoning powers, LOL if everyone was like Shika, relationships would be so much easier.

The big WTF twist though was ShikaGaa - Never saw that coming!! But now I'm insanely interested, I can't see how it would work, but it would put Shika in a position to make a very in depth observation of Gaara and what he needs. Shika is so good at fixing things and thinking things out, and he was already scouting for Neji - Dare I guess that you have a plan? Or are you just exploring your options? It'll be interesting as all hell to see - Not to mention that the smut would be... I have no freaking idea what it would be - But I rest that in your more than capable hands, I'm just going to be patient. You rock out loud! Oh and Please :kneels and assumes the position: Was I bad my Goddess? should I beg Goddess? What about Naruto and Sasuke? You left them in such a naughty spot - I'll be good I promise - What would you like me to do? :Kisses Hestia's feet: I'll do anything.
XD, I mean that.